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"Formidable Desire" by Temerity

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Tell me what you're searching for as you look into my eyes.

Do you see me as I really am? Or just an old disguise?

I kneel & cut myself for you so you can watch me bleed,

But does it really satisfy your insatiable need?

Lift me up and hold me, I am small in your hand.

Whisper all the darkest desires of a man.

Pronate, educate, mold me to your will

Trembling in your aftermath, I am standing still.

Show me your omniscience, all that I should fear.

You are my desire, ...I am still right here.____




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On Monday October 2nd, 2006, Temerity (7) writes:
Thank you ShardsofSilence, and I agree that it is limited. This one was far too personal in its origins, and I never completed it. I submitted it to determine if it was worth a finish. ;)


On Thursday December 14th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (325) writes:
If it still holds great potential, I believe it is definitely worth a finish :)


On Monday October 2nd, 2006, ShardsofSilence (325) writes:
I half like and half dislike the rhyme. Like because it makes reading it easy, dislike because it seems to limit your words; I felt there could be more to add to this...but it's a good write nonetheless.



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