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"The Brink" by Moratha

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When I was younger, I thought of ways
To overcome my solitary life.
Then I realized, we are all alone,
Together in time.

Do you think, think, think
Of ways to sink, sink, sink?
On the brink, brink, brink
Of falling into blissful sleep.

Where do we go from here, what a ride.
It’s such a very long fall.
Hold my hand as we jump
Down into time.

Do you think, think, think
Of ways to sink, sink, sink?
On the brink, brink, brink
Of falling into blissful sleep.


Let’s all get out of here. Find somewhere new. Where is your paradise? I left mine with you.




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On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Mord (47) writes:
Yup, now I have to bring out one similar, I wasnt going to cause they manifested from a haze of pot smoke and I figured I'd get laughed at. Thanks for the inspiration to not give up on who we really are inside. She's not buried that deep, time to exhume.


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, batman nipples (2246) writes:
"Where is your paradise? I left mine with you." I adore those lines. Beautifully rendered, the repetition was a bit of a unique approach that worked rather nicely here. Thank you. Well done.


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, call to arms (38) writes:
I'm with disturbing on this one, the end fucking sold me. it reminds me of i song...i thouroughly enjoyed this.


On Wednesday October 4th, 2006, Instant Insanity (727) writes:
thats good. I liked it. I loved the ending. IT IS AWESOME!!



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