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behind these fierce eyes i watch
as the whole world falls apart around me
i'm a beast
they say beasts cant love or be loved
but when i look into her eyes
she smiles
and i smile back
when were together nothing else matters
when i look at her
i see perfection
she is an angel
her green eyes are so damn beautiful
in fact they are my favorite color
so smart
so sexy
without her id be lost
can a demon and an angel love each other?
and be in perfect harmony?
i love her
with every breath and beat of my heart
two more years before we can be together
i only see her once a week
if i'm lucky
i don't know how much longer i can take it
but i wont leave her
she says i'm perfect too
she says i'm sexy and smart
maybe i am maybe i'm not
i say were perfect for each other
with her body and brains she could have anyone
she chose me
eighty miles away in a little town
all those choices in her big city and...
she chose me
what did a beast like me do
to deserve such a blessing as her
i don't believe she would ever leave me
still i don't want to take chances
the time we spend is great
even better than heaven as a priest describes it to you
every chance i get i hop into my stang
and rush the eighty miles to see her
we make my friends jealous
her friends are still curious
all i can say is
keep looking, shes mine
shes my full moon
that brings the beast in me out
guides me on my hunts
and i am her werewolf
that cherishes her deeply
all the same it is still said
that beasts can't love or be loved
but...
she loves me!

 

this is my first entry and mainly i just want to know what the hell it is. i was just sitting around and filling out some papers when i found a blank piece of notebook paper. i started writing not even paying attention to what i was writing and when i was done this is what it looked like. so if anyone can tell me what it is or suggest any changes or whether they like it at all that would be great. thanks

have made a few changes will post once i get a few good comments




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On Monday September 11th, 2006, Muse (80) writes:
MUAH! your words pull at my soul hon, reason versus heart playing tug-of-war with each other. 'Course i loves ya! ;) may it be imperfection or perfection, it all makes you YOU and that's not something many people can admit or cope with. you see so many pe


On Monday September 11th, 2006, Muse (80) writes:
people trying to pretend and you don't. we need each other in more ways than anyone can count. we'll get through this!


On Saturday September 9th, 2006, Muses_Love (10) writes:
have to read some of ur works and comment u also


On Saturday September 9th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
well it reminded me of the character in Sin City that Mickey Rourke played...I kept thinking Goldie...Goldie...Goldie, anyway, I was suddenly very envious all that talk of sexy eyes...etc...nice,welcome to the domain of the dark one!!!!


On Saturday September 9th, 2006, Muses_Love (10) writes:
thank u magic hater for the warm welcome and also the first comment. lol i hadnt seen that movie untill just the other day. yeah i couldnt help but to write something for my dear baby meg or username Muse. i miss her so! well anyways thanks again and ill



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