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"Ode To a Vet" by Mord

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The troops go marching one by one hurrah, hurrah
The troops hold tight to endless guns hurrah, hurrah
The troops keep marching what a shame
The little one takes a shot in the brain
And the troops keep falling
                           down
                               all around
                                leaving bloody stains

The bombs keep falling two by two hurrah, hurrah
The tomahawks fly it's nothing new hurrah, hurrah
Explosions coming day or night
The middle one's dead without a fight
And the troops keep marching
                            down
                                all around
                                due to metal rain

The boys are drafted three by three hurrah, hurrah
Our children are drafted because they're free hurrah, hurrah
Owned soldiers are coming home in black
New wars will never bring them back
And the troops keep falling
                           down
                              all around
                               reigning primeval pain.


                   



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On Thursday October 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (129) writes:
this was amazing even with the spelling errors. I loved it


On Thursday October 19th, 2006, Mord (47) writes:
Thanks for caring Sharon, I appreciate it.


On Tuesday October 17th, 2006, Sharon Rose (658) writes:
Twas clever. I almost never nitpick on spelling, but I hate to see something nice get ignored because of the errors, so:


On Tuesday October 17th, 2006, Sharon Rose (658) writes:
2nd stanza: 'hurray' should be 'hurrah', 'comming' should be 'coming', 'ones' should be 'one's', 'with out' should be 'without'. 3rd stanza: 'their' should be 'they're', 'comming' should be 'coming', and 'riegning' should be 'reigning'. :)



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