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Boxing shadows in the desert
Boxing shadows in our minds
Yet when our foreheads
Press together
For each other
Eyes tonight

Singing softly words of struggle
Singing softly in hope to find
Yet when our fingers
Gently gliding
For each other
Eyes tonight

Faces melding heart string passion
Faces melding colour binds
As one
Two souls see clearly
For each other
Eyes tonight



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On Friday November 23rd, 2007, Mab (1096) writes:
such a lovely effecting piece...this is poetry at its finest.


On Saturday June 16th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:
Faces belding colour binds.. wonderfull..


On Thursday June 14th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2382) writes:
haven't you posted this before? What's the deal here Noel Edmonds? I like the way the poem opens up but it's not my fav of yours ...hard cheese :P


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, unspeakable truth (154) writes:
Simply stunning write....


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:
So beautiful


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Alanarchy (1611) writes:
I would love to hear this put to music. Great work.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Nuri (199) writes:
I was thinking the same thing. The repitition of "Eyes tonight". I've always admired you carl. Short poignant words that leaves a permanent dent.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, purr_verse (1483) writes:
almost meditative in its gentle insight; softly lovely.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
fully agree with elisa! you write like forest runs, very fucking well ;)


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, elisa (1984) writes:
such clarity and insight..... well said.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
This is beautiful.. just beautiful..!



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