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Soul Sharing Tingles

When you brushed past me
I swear we made love
Or was it our souls
Cosying up
In a liquid sliver of a second
Smooth slides of satisfaction
A technicolour swirl
Of a shared moment

I looked back with tingles
Before I realised
Our bodies
Never touched at all

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On Friday December 28th, 2007, italianbella (305) writes:

delicately weaved words simply beautiful:)

On Sunday July 8th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:

You write alot about love making. I just tend to masturbate that much more then write about it. Good write bro

On Tuesday July 3rd, 2007, Unforgotten (164) writes:

I like it! I never seem to be able to write this style but its good. I got around to reading your poems eventually :)

On Saturday June 9th, 2007, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:

Not a word misplaced, this is immaculately written. Such a lovely portrayal. I commend you.

On Wednesday May 2nd, 2007, jack paper (215) writes:

beautiful indeed... great write carl.. i must read more

On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, purr_verse (1483) writes:

a gently beautiful piece, but particularly this: "In a liquid sliver of a second"... divinely said.

On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, raskal (197) writes:

Carl my good man -this is 'bloody brilliant' -as you, yourself might say. i love the line 'In a liquid sliver of a second'- muchos kudos and well played mate!

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, DarkDruidess (210) writes:

nicely done...I like the way this made me feel.

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, prettydisgrace (144) writes:

This leaves me with the tingles.wonderful so glad i faved you :)

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:

*sigh* Carl this was breathtaking...your chica bonita is one lucky gal ~kristy

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:

oh my god... the last stanza was just.. such an unexpected blow.. this has to be my favourite from you by far.. so utterly perfect, golden gentleman. Wow.

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, An Expired Member (9) writes:

I agree with tania, and this will be faved as well, very powerful write, and i can feel it in my core. - Jigg Saw

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Enigma (127) writes:

This is good. Great write.

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

'when you brushed past me I swear we made love..' wow makes me want to scream. I loved this whole heartedly. thank you for posting this.

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

*faved*

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:

Very beautiful

On Monday April 23rd, 2007, elisa (1981) writes:

Mmm...... felt before being touch... my fav'o'right foreplay... very, very nice.

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