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verablue

For Bazil

electric
girl eccentric
standing poised
on the tip of her pen
pumping poetry
through circuit board veins
screaming violets
desperate for her name
eyes bruised from
too much
meat porn
mysteries
in the hum of the night
buzzing inspiration
she licks
like she spins
beautiful sounds
the crowd reborn
from skyscrapers
once torn
a heart beating blue
like a wartime
heroine on pills

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On Saturday April 7th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:

this is amazing, as the lovely verablue is..electric and very energetic poem. wonderfully done, carl :).

On Saturday March 31st, 2007, verablue (161) writes:

2:14pm...7 and a half hours of sleep and i'm still speachless. no ones written me a poem since i was 15. "pumping poetry through circuit board veins" i love it!

On Sunday April 1st, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:

*swoons*

On Saturday March 31st, 2007, verablue (161) writes:

fucking awesome you are!!! i'm a tad bit speachless (but its also 5:42am and i haven't slept yet). i'll be back to read it a few more times in the morning :)

On Saturday March 31st, 2007, verablue (161) writes:

also, why the hell were you not on my favorites list?? you should have been on there long ago! my apologies.

On Saturday March 31st, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:

You just made my fucking year!!! Thank You, Bazil!!

On Friday March 30th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

where the fuck is my wanker poem? I come back to this, it's a staccato blast of stormtrooper slammin slidetics....yep

On Friday March 30th, 2007, Loketha Angel (158) writes:

This was...beauty. Words were your paints, and you made our eyes the canvas, allowing us to paint the picture. Lovely.

On Friday March 30th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (706) writes:

sweet and sharp, has underlying sound simalarities tying it together without being tied to rhyme. Smooth...like etching cream.

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Freebird (653) writes:

Awesome Carl. -Mar

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, heartdripsblack (759) writes:

loved the flow and every word used was absolutely brilliant. ~ saddened.

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Collective Amnesia (248) writes:

this was just awesome and got my heart pumping. nice one. i'm guessing she'll like it. lol ~Tamara

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

this is fantastic man....slips and slides and DJ prowess to the electro dark beat....one of DPs more 'underground' protagonists....wikid man!!!

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

where the fuck is my tribute poem wild ass?!?!?! *bottom lip wobbles* :((

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Sin (1636) writes:

awww i think hes gonna cry Carl..you better slip him a fingle and show him some love

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

can I get a Kumquat to go.....one with extra juice...oh go on!!! *Crocadile eyes*

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Sin (1636) writes:

i will write you a poem Col *hugs and kumquats*

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:

I want the ode to wankers poem please

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Mylissa (1084) writes:

:} the bestestesetset piece of yours yet. I love it.

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1821) writes:

kick butt poetry!

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:

ha! you did her great service, i wonder how the ever hip-vynal queen will take to it? if she is not impressed, then... OFF WITH HER HEAD!.....obviously alice in wonder..never mind.. none the less, awsome!

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:

*Vinyl*

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:

and meat porn??!! oh the humanity, that stuff is what starlit-dreams are spun from!

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Mab (1018) writes:

how lovely! ~Meaghan

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, prettydisgrace (140) writes:

This is a lovely tribute :) wonderful.

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, blue (1749) writes:

o.O)) this rocks. yup. ~b

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Sin (1636) writes:

what a lovely tribute *slaps your arse* youre wonderful Carl :)

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