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Coursing Fire

She forgot the fire
that coursed through her veins
on remembrance,
she felt alive again

decision set in her eyes
change set in her mind
this time
she won't get trapped
torn between windows
breaking every mirror

screams of yesterday
turned to silent shimmer
tears
once held back
now as joyous
as iris glimmer

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On Sunday March 11th, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:

you write poetry like Hendrix played guitar...beautiful!

On Saturday March 10th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:

Was an enjoyable read, strong and beautiful...inspiring.

On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, dying angel (1373) writes:

"torn between windows breaking every mirror"....if i could swallow this poem..i would.

On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

so outstanding. you sing to me as always.

On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:

the end was a fucking capper to a fire cracker! i love being able to see what someone is thinking just by looking at them, kudos!

On Monday March 5th, 2007, The Fool (1048) writes:

The flow just washed over me, you ring in my head the softest and sweet caress of your words keep me captured and thirsting for more of your poetry.. I always know that my breath will be taken even before I go to read ~Mirrored Nymph

On Monday March 5th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

succinct and remarkably distinct, sometimes we don't need the sweel of cacophony just simple and beautiful words to bathe in a while....very elegant and emotive Carl

On Monday March 5th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

evryone gets a little trapped.....don't forget the fire is a strong message....echos of Dylan Thomas's "rage against the dying of the light!!" nice one pal...

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, cucuio (216) writes:

omg... I loved this... it's.... well I love it...

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, prettydisgrace (144) writes:

i really liked this.. beautiful.

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1164) writes:

"torn between windows/breaking every mirror"..beautiful, carl. your words are perfectly smooth and stunning as always. i really felt this one. thank you.

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

beautiful. damn. ~ saddened.

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:

This was so beautiful. Well done Carl

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:

ah the sweet meloncholy bliss of reflection..it makes hearts ache in the most delicate of ways and turns sadness upside down with the ease of distance...wonderful as always ~kristy

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, blue (1780) writes:

True, the world opens up when the life~fire burns inside. "iris glimmer" =) ~b

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