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dark tiger synthesiser

the beautiful crush of youthful optimism
the gorgeous violence of stars exploding
the smile and light hiding darker secrets
the female heart survives the most fatal beatings

the serotonin rush from two iris twinkles
reciprocating with friends this almighty feeling
the magic and buzz as electrons mingle
reality falls flat as your soul is left tingling

together as one
alone we find ourselves

a bed of sunlight in a foreign country
exploring life as the senses combine
into a dream-state rush
of elation and realisation
harder times converted into positive currency

breathing in through the nose
out through the mouth
the mind is set free
escape from this mortal shell
colours alight into changing forms

like a certain complex music
beautiful in its clarity
like the windows of a woman’s soul
stripping away the terror from beauty
finding herself in heaven
like a dark tiger synthesiser

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On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (22) writes:

like the windows of a woman's soul stripping away the terror from beauty beautiful just beautiful what a wonderful piece!

On Sunday August 12th, 2007, What Limes (164) writes:

I'm not sure how to respond. I feel cold and insecure... like I'm missing something. But your words help fill the gap...

On Sunday July 8th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1879) writes:

As the senses combine. Thats just how it feels when this poem comes to an ending. Wonderfull job writing this. P.

On Wednesday July 4th, 2007, DyingWorlds (1) writes:

Truly, a piece of art. Well written. - Tim.

On Saturday June 9th, 2007, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:

That last stanza knocked me the fuck out with such a steady blow. This is a beautiful and true piece of art. You should be proud.

On Thursday May 31st, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (420) writes:

this builds rapidly. its like being in the car when someone else you dont know is driving faster than you do. that alone made it worth it

On Monday May 14th, 2007, capt_funguy (1006) writes:

seemed of the primative, and responsive ... the elements of the gift we're given ... the sight of bareness (of soul and electric)- the softer side of altered states ... where the self feels the stars ... i thought this was beautiful... funguy

On Saturday April 14th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:

Love Your Use Of Intellect Here, Very Pleasurable Piece!

On Monday January 29th, 2007, zanewill (117) writes:

I love the "electrons mingling" part. how true, man>>>write on

On Monday January 29th, 2007, ashottothetemple (73) writes:

This was scorching! Absolute insanity and I love it! +B+

On Thursday January 25th, 2007, Drea (976) writes:

I can see why you say this is your best. I've read this a few times. I've read a lot of your works...I just don't comment because... saying "amazing, damn, great" isn't very original... but it's all I have.. heh

On Thursday January 18th, 2007, braindead_poet (585) writes:

lol, you were certainly right. absolutely amazing. beautiful, beautiful illustrations. now that is a perception worth more than a skimming.

On Wednesday January 17th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:

Wow. I had to read this very slowly and break it apart. My favorite poems are the ones that make me think. This is beyond words. Can i have your mind!?

On Wednesday January 10th, 2007, fushigi no kaosu (88) writes:

Beautifully interesting!... I can't think of much else right now.. and I know I'll think of it later and be like....aww man... heh I ramble.. --Kaosu

On Wednesday January 3rd, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Gives vividly to my imagination and is also pretty as well, pretty being my favorite word in the english language.

On Friday November 10th, 2006, verablue (164) writes:

loved the title! and the rest surely didn't disapoint....i think this is my favorite of yours so far.

On Friday November 3rd, 2006, An Expired Member (1) writes:

Nice....'Nuff said

On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:

Interesting write. I enjoy the beauty of how things can be and become in this piece...especially destruction and pain.

On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, GreyDividing (205) writes:

Damn, dude! This is grade A shit right here. I am really impressed with this bitter sweet flow of gorgeous optimism. Write the hell on big chief. Friggin nice!

On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, An Expired Member (32) writes:

not my cup of tea but it was good

On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

mate!! That was the shnizzle right there....loved the title; wild and the poem itself...a bit log for you no? hahaha...just teasing...I think the first stanza is like line one iambic pentameter with 2/3 hexameters?

On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

The wholepoem is vivid and lush; creative and sparky....alas I have no more bookmarks to give but this would earn one for sure...fantastic write,I love it so!!

On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Cheers, dude! I managed to write that one today at work. I was determined to take up your challenge of a longer poem than I normally would write.

On Friday November 3rd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

hahaha...challenge eh? Don't get me started...I could test you, maybe?!?!?!

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