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dreamsandghosts

it’s too dark to be ethereal
too other-worldly to be called real
slipping off somewhere
to the other ninety-percent
is this transcension
or frightening descent?

behind dreams
myths explode
touching ghosts
truth unfolds
ghosts
in
dreams
in
dreams
in
ghosts
                       creates
destroys
interweaves
fear
it
come
                          so
                          naturally
in
my
mind
there
are
no
seams

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On Monday July 16th, 2007, Err0r (586) writes:

This is done amazingly. I love this write. How many people do we honestly know that would do a subject like this. This just blows my mind. Very nice write!

On Thursday May 31st, 2007, An Expired Member (10) writes:

Wow, this is visually stunning, both on the page an din my mind.

On Wednesday May 23rd, 2007, dying angel (1374) writes:

still love this.

On Saturday April 14th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (409) writes:

Intense Wording, Very Nice!

On Saturday March 24th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:

"behind dreams myths explode" The ethereal structure plays well w/ your words like "touching ghosts" as "truth unfolds". Is that 'sand' in the middle of dream&ghosts,like dreamSand? Or just an accidentally creativeness on your part (I often find the...

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, dying angel (1374) writes:

i love coming back to this one Carl...something about it just keeps pulling me back to it...it's so hauntingly beautiful.

On Sunday November 19th, 2006, sIo (895) writes:

this is very choppy. but it's supposed to be...sort of gives me a feeling that i know has approached but is still creeping up on me...and later today i'll feel it. good write.

On Monday September 11th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:

i loved the flow of this. just amazing. im looking forward to more from you. welcome to dp.

On Monday September 11th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

this is magnificent. the flow was compelling, and the title drew me in. altogether wonderful write.

On Monday September 11th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:

oh, and welcome to dp. :)

On Monday September 11th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2380) writes:

aye...mucho welcomes....

On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2380) writes:

this..wasa spookface funhouse rush...perfectly darkly tantalising...clawing at my eyes and dreamprobing and imaginatively structured....drop a bomb why don't ya -really excellent!!!

On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Emma Lee (15) writes:

I loved it, it has great flow to it.

On Sunday September 10th, 2006, blue (1780) writes:

Interesting write. Seemed to fall much in line with it's form. Welcome to dp. ~b

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