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She said, “You want to write songs, boy? Better start with poetry.”
“You got rhythm? Then you got poetry.
You got words that sing so sweet? Then you got melody.
Because boy, I’ll tell you this once, you start anywhere, you better start with poetry.
It may seem so hard
But it’s really so easy
When it’s true
And comes from the heart
Just sing your soul
With words on a page
Just say it
Because it’s you

“Mastery comes later
But first you must learn
To swim in a sea of words
That seem confusing at first
Because you don’t understand
But when you look with your heart
It slowly, slowly
Begins to make sense
And when you realise they’re your own
To make with what you will
Then the fun begins
And you can lose yourself
In those waters
And gradually, gradually
You'll find you can swim.

“You want to write songs, boy? Better start with poetry.
It’s the best way anyone can truly begin.”







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On Monday July 28th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:
she's a wise woman this one is... wet with truth... and ocean deep. For some reason, I pictured an elderly dark skinned woman sittin' on a porch... rocking chair, cross stitchin in the lazy summer sun... eye glasses slung low on her nose... speaking from the heart as the cicadas danced behind her eyes. very nice


On Monday July 28th, 2008, Carmina Gitana (118) writes:
Clean, smooth, strong, like a glass of good liquor and just as delightful to savor. Loved it.


On Monday July 28th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (545) writes:
damn brother carl, you amaze me time after time, this is excellent my friend, intense and beautiful, keep em comin brother carl -symph-


On Monday July 28th, 2008, Skarlet Rebell Queen (192) writes:
*claps* this got melody,this got rhythm... you want to write songs, boy? what a great way to start.. i love it..


On Monday July 28th, 2008, An Expired Member (23) writes:
so true.... the best advice


On Monday July 28th, 2008, downstream (94) writes:
Poetry - comes from the heart, comes from the soul, and comes from you :) *smiles warmly* awesome write ~Downstream~


On Monday July 28th, 2008, Scarrzz (147) writes:
That's Cool CJ, Enjoyed it. I bet you have a moelody to go with the lyrics.


On Monday July 28th, 2008, saintedmad (1155) writes:
**snaps** has a distinct falvour and wryness to it. . .. . nessa


On Monday July 28th, 2008, After hours (636) writes:
humble beginnings of 'walk before you run',..think ill take baby steps forever!



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