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Moon Lady of Phoenix Snow

Virgins in foliage with blood on jungle teeth
Brush the vines as paint turns to sand
Spots on eyes raining embers into vision
Sharp flowers abstract everyday faces

Deserts smothered in snow and
An orangutan on an ice cap

Moon lady of phoenix snow
Calm guide in this insanity show
Turmoil swirls in your wild irises
Through breakdown, wisdom gained

Your intellect unfurling along stringed vibrations
11-dimensional beauty greater than every theory of god
Spherical notes shaped perfectly
Like secrets
Into the curve of your palm

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On Friday May 16th, 2008, insanemonroe (29) writes:

tis good ^^) me like lol-monroe*

On Sunday April 20th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:

Monkeys fit in everywhere. Good write man. I'll make sure to re-read it and re-comemnt

On Friday May 30th, 2008, carlosjackal (1598) writes:

I'm still waiting for the re-comment :P ....and a new write from you :) -Carl

On Saturday April 12th, 2008, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:

ohhhhhhh...you greasy bollock banger brains, this was a lush excorvationatesily dream-slipper! Nice title backed up by some odd fantasy-esque imagery and narrative, but why the heck did you put an orangatang in there?!?! Is it because you support Chelsea FC and they have a Handicap centre for yous guys?! Hah...different for you, what inspired this evocation numb-nuts?

On Saturday April 12th, 2008, carlosjackal (1598) writes:

I'll let the mystery to fuck with your brain ;)

On Saturday April 12th, 2008, Magic Hatter (2383) writes:

ohhhhhhh....will it be sprinkled in choc chip bits?!

On Thursday April 17th, 2008, carlosjackal (1598) writes:

Are menstrual chewy bits to your liking? :P

On Saturday April 12th, 2008, ColourGod (20) writes:

She plucked the strings of my heart from the very first line's start. Fantasy under the influence of science. She tastes my tongue sweet in my mouth.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, Skarlet Rebell Queen (254) writes:

this is wonderful...every line holds strength and beauty.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, saintedmad (994) writes:

this really reminds me of a book i read, though i cannot recall the title off of my noggin....something about 'nam survivors and their traipse through sanity and salvation. . .. the reckoning? i think. .. . but hard.splendid stuff. ness

On Friday April 11th, 2008, elisa (1981) writes:

truly a vision with a real touch... you really grabbed ahold of a beautiful image ... i'm not done with this yet:)

On Friday April 11th, 2008, Aunty Depressant (749) writes:

*loses gravitons to this universe...I might have to paint this.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:

Pivotal imagery. Slayer of an opening line leads to a superb execution. This is fucking ace poetry. Damn you, Carl. You always make me swear in comments. Hahaha.

On Friday April 11th, 2008, Fallen Moon (547) writes:

I loves this.../Your intellect unfurling along stringed vibrations/ oh the cello popped in my head when i read that ^_^

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