ahhh....sweet bliss bloody magic! The reason this poem works is because it lives such a lingering feel, such as you (the reader) continue where the writer left off, the idea of going on, loving...deep into the night - magical poem with a timeless sweep; magic magic magic!

lives/leaves*...it's all good regardless!

It all works, brother ;)

I dont know what to comment. I've read it over and over again. Trying to bring forth something celestial. Perhaps if it were in latin. :P

faved, this is brilliance brother carl -symph-

oh this is absolutely stunning...MISS you Mr. and this is a great way to come back to perfection!!

I've been reading, and re-reading this back and forth for the last half an hour or so, trying to decide where to begin. I'm giving up. This is my favorite poem from you. It's a perfect moment, captured perfectly. Major kudos.

I agree, this is a beautiful piece, I too reread it several times...and have nothing to say except that I loved it.

I savour your words like a glass of fine wine...may the magic never die.

The whole poem and meaning behind it is entangles together and it's creation is beautiful. Good job!

This poem lingers. It's truly something extraordinary.

beautiful..i love how the two brief stanzas intertwined with each other. i've been craving poems like these..simply gorgeous.