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"Unstop Spiral" by carlosjackal

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by Alanarchy & carlosjackal



Spin thought dream rush
Collecting like rainwater
Drowning so sweet in her touch
My worries bubble to the surface
Deep in aqua spark eyes in union
Lost in the rise and swell between subtlety and need
Our souls entwine as our hearts entangle,
Around the headstones rising above another day's worry


We beat for the night, for it is ours in a blink
Spin thought dream rush, beckon conscience forward
So worries bubbling burst, our sparking eyes bring us to surface
Gasping for breath, through the shape of a name
Her laughter distorts terror beautiful
She'll unwrap the sheets, like breaking rain
To spin our conjoined hearts into the sun








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On Thursday November 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (19) writes:
it was beautiful, in an almost angry way...I dont know, the visuals i get are...pretty but very sad. perfect combination


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, Narcissa (718) writes:
"Around the headstones rising above anther days worry" Love that line. you boys - such melody you conduct togehter :)


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, Fantecstasy (81) writes:
absolutely beautiful... you took my breath away.


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, What Limes (161) writes:
I wanna know who's this is for...


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:
Ah, every single is beautiful. Of course that is what I expected from two great poets.. you should do this again. Please? For me? :P


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
Of course..Anything for our Platinum Lady :)


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, Alanarchy (1608) writes:
Consider it done.


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:
Every single line*. Damn my sleepy typing.


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Alanarchy (1608) writes:
Noticed a typo. Nothing big. Just 'subtlEty'


On Thursday November 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
Sorted :)


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Geisha (817) writes:
AMAZING!! It's so... breath-taking...Awesome write.-Airi


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, Unforgotten (164) writes:
Very nice. I like the "we beat for the night, for it is ours in a blink" Man I could use that!


On Wednesday November 7th, 2007, blue (1779) writes:
argh. sorry, I cant even make it through one stanza today. Ill come back when the monkeys have retreated.



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