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"Drinking Tears" by xDollx

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Not wanting to wipe away the sorrow,
it's just so much better than a shelter...

Spilled tears, like spilled ink,
crosses and taints,
soft shallow ripples.
A sea of paper.

Blending with the black,
to shape and smear the already written smudges.
Waves of tears, just spill and spill.

Drowned in her own tears.
so much better, than swiming in fear.
Such strong feelings, finally free.

"Please drink away my tears"


[Thank you Kass]



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On Sunday September 24th, 2006, Bluegirl (243) writes:
"waves of tears just spill and spill" This was gorgeous. Keep the ink flowing, hun!


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:
agreed, this is an interesting piece. Don't think I have ever read anything like it before, and it is a very interesting point of view. Very lovely -Heather-


On Monday September 18th, 2006, K_Love (684) writes:
Beautiful, the imagery is lovely, I'm not even sure what to say, I'm floored with this.


On Saturday September 16th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2401) writes:
inky tears leaking upon a page...some unusual dispositions here and a feeling of toal unrest distorts...swallowing like a wave of the ocean...


On Friday September 15th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
This was beautiful, I know how this could be indeed, I would rather drown in the salty bitter-sweet liquid that flows from my eyes, then deal with the frightful thing called fear.. You expressed this with magic ~Gothic



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