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All the tales that you told.
So far conviced, twisted and entangled...
[No more]

But I was the fool,
the only fool.
The way the lying of your cheating tongue,
crawled up inside my ears...
licking the insides,
and washing away all my fears.
[not]

I wish I could've seen how the [fated] end was near.
I didn't.
And after all these years,
I'm not worth it any more.

Jesus H. Christ.
Just broken down to tears,
kept in a safe white box.

I was the fool,
I was the fool.
All the promises made,
are just now in a place of forget.

The ways of your lying cheating tongue,
has crawled up inside my ears.


[About a year old, I'm very fond of this little piece]



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On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:
You are fond as you should be, not only cuz it is your own peice, but because it is Beautiful. A close friend of mine is going through similar, and I just hope she can find a way to get her feelings of regret out. Thank you for sharing. -Heather-


On Friday December 29th, 2006, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
this was beautiful, i will have to read more of your work for sure


On Monday September 11th, 2006, Drea (920) writes:
This was good. Welcome.


On Saturday September 9th, 2006, xDollx (46) writes:
Thank you very much for the feedback, both on the poem and welcomings. =) I'm glad you like it


On Saturday September 9th, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT (97) writes:
the imagery is facinating, i love it as well


On Saturday September 9th, 2006, Gold Dust Woman (172) writes:
"I was the fool, All the promises made, are just now in a place of forget." those lines struck a chord with me. this reminds me of a younger me. Welcome to Dp.


On Saturday September 9th, 2006, blue (1700) writes:
"I was the fool, I was the fool" I have proclaimed myself as such many a time, and always with that secondary assertion. I too am fond of this write. Welcome to dp. Love the verse on your profile btw. ~b



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