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What happens to the kaleidoscope soul
Forever turning, growing old

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On Monday June 11th, 2007, Eric (93) writes:

Wonderfully written!! Loved this. Simple, yet complex.

On Wednesday May 9th, 2007, DeemedHeartless (48) writes:

that depends on your perception totally...you have to ask yourself what the "kaleidoscope" element really has in this...:)

On Wednesday May 9th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

would it grow old if it was actively moving forever (hence timeless)? just food for thought, loved the concept

On Tuesday May 8th, 2007, DeemedHeartless (48) writes:

Thanks for the comment Urban..

On Monday April 30th, 2007, urbanhumility (1377) writes:

beautiful.......grounding.....well spoken........urban

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