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Remember me
All the colors of my life
Paint a visual picture
Capture me
Then set me free

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On Friday January 11th, 2008, Ainsof (1866) writes:

the setting free part... I take that as a forgetting me... did you intend the whole to be paradoxical in that way, just wondering if I were reading it right. I love short words with long lasting effects.

On Friday January 11th, 2008, DeemedHeartless (48) writes:

not neccessarily to forget... actually, this piece was written when I thought my days were going to be short, "then set me free" actually refers to me going from this world to eternity. :)

On Tuesday January 8th, 2008, Kui (703) writes:

Simple yet it painted a beautiful picture in my head...-Gin

On Friday January 11th, 2008, DeemedHeartless (48) writes:

thanks for your comment Gin, it is very much appreciated.

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