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short & bittersweet V

from on high i've fallen hard
and every night i lose to thee
of my broken soul a shard
until there's nothing left of me.

~ RhymeBound

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On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, wilted (306) writes:

Perfect. [yes, i'm going to read and comment on every one of these]

On Friday February 8th, 2008, An Expired Member (40) writes:

These keep getting better and better. I love the to the point-ness of all of these. They make an impact. thanks :) --vince.

On Wednesday October 31st, 2007, Mahakala (255) writes:

and this one even more...

On Monday May 21st, 2007, Lolita (121) writes:

The imagery alone made this perfect. Not to mention you always flawless rhyme and heartbreaking theme.

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (662) writes:

*is glad to have a heart that consists somewhat of ice putting one on a pedestal not smart but then I'm not nice :P

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (662) writes:

must remember to put commas in next time :)

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, GraveFlower (380) writes:

how do you caputure so much emotion and beauty in such little lines,,,beautiful, love it~*dani*~

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

So beautiful for being such a small piece. amazing.

On Thursday March 8th, 2007, Sin (1622) writes:

so sad but so elegantly composed...you know if we ever meet im just gonna hug you for like an hour

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