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short & bittersweet III

love you i forever shall.
unrequited til i die
and that day i will recall
hope is just a sweet white lie...

~ RhymeBound

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On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, wilted (307) writes:

This is rather paradoxical to me, how something so seemingly insignificant as four lines and twenty two words could be so incredibly deep, meaningful, and beautiful.

On Friday February 8th, 2008, An Expired Member (40) writes:

I love how these are sequential but each has their own flare. I enjoyed this a lot.

On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (276) writes:

heart sighs so beautiful..

On Monday May 21st, 2007, Lolita (121) writes:

Sigh. This made me sad. |Crawls onto your lap and hugs you tightly| Hope isn't always a lie.

On Sunday February 25th, 2007, Mab (974) writes:

this is perfect in its simplicity... when we don't burden the page with jargon, the words seem more potent

On Saturday February 24th, 2007, Mylissa (1057) writes:

wonderful write. I love how you have this in a set of III so far.

On Friday February 23rd, 2007, The Fool (970) writes:

Aww, you still break my heart, somehow the pieces are smashed smaller but they will never compare to the pain you face*Hugs* ~Mirrored Nymph

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Freebird (625) writes:

Hmmm... That makes sense. Maybe hope is just a sweet white lie. Interesting..

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Aunty Depressant (663) writes:

Poor dear, you unfortunately are one that gets to demonstrate the beauty of pain in prose. May you be in error assessing the affair in one way or the other.

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, ShardsofSilence (327) writes:

*bites

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Tania (296) writes:

short but it delivered alot.. great

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Sin (1624) writes:

another beautiful sliver from you...this was sad ~kristy

On Thursday February 22nd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1106) writes:

i totally enjoy your shorts, they spark with intellegence and thought, not at all like some of the other peoples short writes, fantastic!

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