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short & bittersweet II

if asked my heartache to relate,
my woe i clad in words absurd:
i'm but a fish that cruel fate
had fall in love with sweet a bird.

~ RhymeBound

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On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, wilted (306) writes:

Simply beautiful. I read this at least five times and it gained more meaning each time.

On Friday February 8th, 2008, An Expired Member (40) writes:

Your words are beautiful and pour onto the paper like a river from rain. Thanks for this --Vince.

On Monday May 21st, 2007, Lolita (121) writes:

Eeesh, I had a "Why didn't I think of that?" moment.

On Wednesday February 21st, 2007, The Fool (970) writes:

This is just perfect like Mylissa said, you slip these right passed me and when I'm glancing in your profile I find them like hidden notes♥ ~Mirrored Nymph

On Sunday February 18th, 2007, Mylissa (1056) writes:

perfect.

On Wednesday February 21st, 2007, Sin (1622) writes:

agreed

On Friday February 16th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:

applauds, nice fallow up!

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, ShardsofSilence (325) writes:

Spoken like a true poet. Wish I could say more, but I am horrible with good feedback and words of comfort..

On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (662) writes:

Have you ever seen the Mind's Eye? You might enjoy, or it might torture you more.There is an excerpt of animation of birds and fish uniting. This brought it to mind. *Casts line and throws you in the tub :P

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