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short & bittersweet I

what is endless can't be ended.
what is broken can't be mended.
what is lost can't be regained.
and what's set free can't be restrained.

~ RhymeBound

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On Tuesday June 3rd, 2008, empty_remains (77) writes:

i loved the whole set, my favorite by far was the second. thank you for sharing.

On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, wilted (306) writes:

Simple and caustic.

On Friday February 8th, 2008, An Expired Member (40) writes:

wow. This is really cool. I usually don't get into the really short works. They seem to be trying too hard to be profound. But I liked this a LOT. --Vince.

On Thursday August 23rd, 2007, unspeakable truth (144) writes:

They were all beautiful...Read to the newest one and returned here to comment. It is like a peek into self reflection...

On Saturday July 28th, 2007, swing_the_hammer (72) writes:

an appropriate title! nice.

On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Revisable Retina (148) writes:

love it

On Sunday June 10th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (461) writes:

i agree. :)

On Monday May 21st, 2007, Lolita (121) writes:

The title does suit it perfectly.

On Wednesday March 28th, 2007, OttOEviL (90) writes:

bADASS

On Friday March 23rd, 2007, adreamnotwanted (40) writes:

very tru.

On Sunday February 11th, 2007, Sin (1622) writes:

short and tapered wisdom..i love minimalism when its done with such class ~kristy

On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (203) writes:

hahaha, I concur to everyone, it doesnt need to be said a million times. thanks for the write -Heather-

On Thursday January 18th, 2007, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

4 lines of sheer quotable brilliance.

On Monday January 15th, 2007, blue (1700) writes:

yupyup

On Saturday January 6th, 2007, elisa (1990) writes:

macro meets micro..... a powerful write.... words of absolution....well said.

On Friday January 5th, 2007, The Fool (970) writes:

Incredible~ you say more with four sentences then anyone I know ~Mirrored

On Monday January 1st, 2007, island warrior (300) writes:

Great write.An example of how less can be more.

On Monday January 1st, 2007, alaskanamber (126) writes:

words that make me feel at peace

On Saturday December 30th, 2006, Mylissa (1056) writes:

Simple, soft, beautifully spoken.

On Friday December 29th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (662) writes:

Not too sure what to say, just know the feeling *pulls slivers of broken dreams from heart...and bleeds some more.

On Friday December 29th, 2006, Lynaes (1109) writes:

The last two lines were my favourite. As Enchanting said, every line is so true. I've found very often in life that something you lose could never be regained, atleast not in the same form. Simple, yet so affective.

On Saturday December 30th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (325) writes:

because I suck with comments, I am simply going to say: I concur.

On Friday December 29th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1041) writes:

Oooooh, how very true those four lines are, with meanings deeper than anything that might have otherwise been stated in more words. These lines speak volumes. ~*Beth*~

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