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i come from lands forgotten
by all who walk not there.
what flesh is left is rotten
all bones are blank and bare.

where night is truly endless
in different shades of black.
where ghastly flames of candles
light ways you can't walk back.

where time is an illusion.
where no end is in sight.
where life's brought to conclusion.
where souls are made to blight.

be you a king or beggar
a young lad or a lass,
the dead they walk and stagger
no gender and no class.

coins are just bits of metals
and titles only words
where roses lack their petals
and spring the song of birds.

~ RhymeBound
(first published under the name DarkRiver)



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On Friday July 25th, 2008, urbanhumility (1352) writes:
poetry incarnate!.........well done


On Monday June 11th, 2007, Preacher X (60) writes:
I friend loves this. He wants to write a metal music song out of it *lol*


On Monday May 21st, 2007, Lolita (120) writes:
Zombies!!! You know I love it already. The final stanza was amazing. You continue to blow me away. You make me appreciate rhyme.


On Saturday March 3rd, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
this is the one i like the most of all your work


On Friday February 23rd, 2007, The Spiral Downward (401) writes:
Excellent structure and as Prophet said the "Timeless Imagery" is fantastic


On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, TheProphetUntold (358) writes:
A humbly crippling piece. Death brings an paralleled sense of equality, but this certainly is close. Timeless imagery, and again superb ryhme. *bows* Amazing write. +tpu+


On Saturday December 23rd, 2006, Recycled (161) writes:
I remember DarkRiver


On Wednesday November 29th, 2006, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
expertly crafted...nice


On Wednesday November 29th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (331) writes:
simple and neat with outstanding vivid imagery. I'm thinking in pictures now..


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (164) writes:
I agree to this. The whole thing is just lovely. The first and second Stanza's gave me such a vivid picture, I will have to eventually put it on paper so you can see. Thanks a bunch. -Heather-


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (159) writes:
~very simplistic and lyrical and nature yet still evokes the feeling and elevates the soul...this was something amazing, ill be reading your posts...very cool write


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, soul dancer (169) writes:
Perfect!


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, deadrosesrdust (136) writes:
Loved it.


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, LOKI (266) writes:
where night was truely endless in diffrent shades of black.Loved this line.Poem had a good flow.nicely done LOKI


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, The Fool (1005) writes:
This was incredible!!!!! I'm glad you posted again no matter what it still awesome and always worth while.. I love reading you.. You give imagination to me all over again and define it into a new meaning of emotions from another heart



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