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"haul thy anchor, set thy sail
and journey by the sea.
follow my longing, loving wail
to hold and be with me.

seek me by the waters deep
where waves kiss harsh the moon.
upon a reef here high and steep
i hum my lonesome tune.

no day goes by where i don't long
for thy so soothing touch.
my voice it trembles in my song
i miss you oh so much.

no night goes by without a tear
joining the sea below.
i need, i want, must have you near
and never let you go."

==

when from afar i saw thy ship,
my hopes rose like the tide.
with swelling heart and quaking lip
i've wished you to my side.

i've begged the winds thy sails to fill,
the waves to push thy stern.
hasten thy ship onwards until
i'd have for what i yearn.

but my desire made me blind,
took all my cares away.
so drunk with love as out of mind
the price i've had to pay.

words alone can't speak my grief
oh how my heart was maimed,
when thy ship crashed into the reef
and by the sea was claimed.

==

i've sought you by the waters deep
below the moonbeam cast
where you've succumbed to final sleep,
my first love and my last.

thy body from the depths i've raised
and on my isle interred,
then finally the sea I faced
and made my woe be heard.

my voice swelled to a dire dirge,
cacophony of pain.
the waves they roared up with a surge
and hard down beat the rain.

unending tears spring from my eyes,
give birth to restless waves.
The wind it echoes all my cries,
the storm it madly raves.

==

yet too i sing of love that's lost,
of my affection true,
and what my eagerness us cost
and my lament and rue.

the winds they mourning spread my word
of longing and remorse.
sometimes by sailors it is heard
who then for here set course.

for they are blind as i once was;
of love they are a thrall.
my warnings they ignore because
love fools makes of us all.

hundreds have here sunk their ships
and each of them i mourn.
an endless song bring forth my lips
here on my isle forlorn...


~ RhymeBound




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On Thursday March 20th, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:
i was reminded about this one again last nite. its f-ing great. brilliant rhythm. two pens up! *cheers* ~ta~


On Monday March 17th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1798) writes:
The bookmarks says it al man. And this is a master piece.


On Monday March 17th, 2008, Circe Avalon (184) writes:
I love this poem, you did so well on it. It is my new fav. Very good.


On Saturday March 15th, 2008, Dommi (125) writes:
this was incredible, an impressive piece indeed. awesome work :)


On Friday March 14th, 2008, Velvet_Raventon (657) writes:
Very nice and enjoyable poem! Very well written. ~V.


On Monday January 14th, 2008, Pureheartless (10) writes:
this poem makes me orgy.


On Friday December 28th, 2007, italianbella (330) writes:
amazing and beautifully written great write:)


On Saturday November 3rd, 2007, Pseudonynill (193) writes:
Nice cadence bru. Your syllables match. Great flow. i smell weed. Damn hippies.


On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, happilydepressed (215) writes:
In Awe


On Tuesday August 7th, 2007, An Expired Member (8) writes:
wow....beautiful, i could picture it perfectly.so lovely. x.raven


On Saturday July 28th, 2007, swing_the_hammer (79) writes:
beautiful, lonely... i really could see through the siren's eyes...


On Monday June 11th, 2007, Preacher X (60) writes:
I agree with allt he comments here, and as my comment on the sailors lament states (i read it first) This poems seems almost made for song.


On Wednesday May 23rd, 2007, The Spiral Downward (414) writes:
Not Sure Why, But This Always Makes Me Think Of The Song Sirens By Savatage, LOL! Once Again, Impressive Write!


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1141) writes:
"seek me by the waters deep where waves kiss harsh the moon." You truly live up to your DP name, sir. Your meter is perfect. The melancholy is beautiful even w/ all it's grief: "...by the waters deep below the moonbeam cast" I love the imagery. ...


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1141) writes:
... It feels as if you wrote this a thousand years ago and still it carries it's weight. Masterfully crafted. (& be sheer coincidence posted on my b/d, '06). Very well done.


On Friday May 18th, 2007, Lolita (89) writes:
"i've sought you by... " That was my favourite stanza. This whole thing is gorgeous, Lee. You're gifted.


On Thursday April 12th, 2007, An Expired Member (16) writes:
incredible!!!


On Friday March 30th, 2007, An Expired Member (45) writes:
that was incredible:]


On Wednesday February 14th, 2007, TheProphetUntold (336) writes:
The is almost epic. Such a enchanting tale of love, longing and loss. Obviously the ryhme is the star of the show.. Quite enthralling, and brilliant. +tpu+


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (131) writes:
It has been so long that I have read Poetry of this kind. I thought I was privileged to read your newer works, and when I finally got to this one... It's absolutely Lovely. If you dont have any of these published already, they really need to be. I tha


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (414) writes:
Very Impressed Am I


On Friday January 12th, 2007, FallenHero (5) writes:
i am impressed by the imagery that you managed to convey in verse. quite a feat in my book.


On Tuesday January 9th, 2007, Sin (1680) writes:
haunting and sad conveyed elegantly with flawless flow, great write ~kristy


On Saturday December 30th, 2006, urbanhumility (1277) writes:
latent with deep feeling.........your words are beautifuly sad............well done


On Sunday December 10th, 2006, NikesRain (1458) writes:
wonderfully smooth and entrancing read..... captivating and moving


On Wednesday November 29th, 2006, MelvinOliverDrauma (568) writes:
sweet


On Sunday November 19th, 2006, SamoneDrone (417) writes:
this is poetry. simply beautiful, there is not one thing that could be changed in this to make it better. from the title, to the rhyme scheme, to the word choice; it's BEAUTIFUL. ....-samone


On Monday November 13th, 2006, Mylissa (1157) writes:
I love this...great read.


On Friday November 10th, 2006, torn_beauty (106) writes:
well you are extremely talented. This was so lovely.


On Monday November 6th, 2006, wicked flesh (33) writes:
Pretty and graceful. Extremely heartfelt.


On Thursday November 2nd, 2006, Sanctuary (84) writes:
Such an awesome piece. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I look forward to reading more from you


On Wednesday November 1st, 2006, An Expired Member (35) writes:
wow its just wow thats all i can say it definatly makes me think of things that have happened


On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, Instant Insanity (779) writes:
You are such an excellent poet. You should get a DP membership ][Nstant ][Nsanity


On Saturday October 14th, 2006, GreyDividing (226) writes:
Old fashioned ballad feel, very much enjoyed. I smell Talent.


On Saturday September 30th, 2006, Astra Dei (655) writes:
This left me in awe and i stand all amazed. Your words swept me from line to line and i almost wish it didnt have to end. But the ending itself fit perfectly. You are a great talent.


On Thursday September 28th, 2006, elisa (1931) writes:
no doubt a classic piece of True poetry.... i've read this many, many times now....surely, you are aware of how remarkable every facet of this is.....you must be the only survivor of D. J. Locker.


On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, Mord (48) writes:
You've sank straight to the depths of the truth. lovely


On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, blue (1866) writes:
~b


On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, An Expired Member (15) writes:
you should really post more... this is just wonderful.... *faves* *~`burned`~*


On Sunday September 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (15) writes:
this is... gorgeous. I am a rhymer as well, though not all of the time, and it makes me happy to see another, especially one who writes so beautifully, many people do not appreciate rhyming poetry as they should. *~`burned`~*


On Sunday September 24th, 2006, blue (1866) writes:
I can't stop coming back to this. You've achieved the near impossible with me. Many thanks. ~b


On Sunday September 24th, 2006, blue (1866) writes:
Fucking brilliant! ~b


On Friday September 15th, 2006, Instant Insanity (779) writes:
Nice, Reminds me alot of Walt Whitmen, There arn't many poets that write like this anymore. Very Good.


On Monday September 11th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (355) writes:
goodness, a dizzy. I'm deeply intrigued; all the images crashing in my mind. You've left me speechless


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, blue (1866) writes:
Ya know what? I'm so taken with this piece that I need to delete a bookmark (all full =/) and add it to me collection of favs. Shakespeare's sonnets are the only other rhymes I enjoy (outside of musical lyrics) so yeah, you've accomplished something beyon


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, blue (1866) writes:
..beyond great here for me. Highest praise to you! ~b


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, Solace (1435) writes:
A beautiful piece of work, brings a whole depth of feeling, that lonely stuck to the mast feel, that beautiful terror...well done


On Sunday September 10th, 2006, urbanhumility (1277) writes:
ageless in its reach........a tale of loss.......and the trials.......that love imprints on one..........truly beautiful words....................well done...........urban


On Thursday September 7th, 2006, wonderlandhysteria (2228) writes:
Spoken with a certain grace as well as overwhelming sorrow. I admit, I have read this several times over the past few days and it has touched me deeply. Beautifully rendered. Thank you.


On Thursday September 7th, 2006, warmaprylrain (107) writes:
this was refreshing to read and fall into ... **smiles**..~RAIN~


On Thursday September 7th, 2006, blue (1866) writes:
Oh my! Well. haha, here it comes.. I really do not like rhyming poetry, at all, but this!! ..this is absolutely suberb in it's flow. All too often the rhymes people use become tedious, silly..


On Thursday September 7th, 2006, blue (1866) writes:
But you have most certainly avoided such trappings. My highest compliments to you, on this remarkably wonderful rhyme! =) *you get a cookie* ~b


On Wednesday September 6th, 2006, purr_verse (1488) writes:
*three cheers* for marvellous metre and syllabic cadence, all while delivering this wonderful and enrapturing story. Manywelcomes to dp; excellent write.


On Wednesday September 6th, 2006, purr_verse (1488) writes:
ps: i love your little worddance on your homepage.


On Wednesday September 6th, 2006, An Expired Member (9) writes:
I guess I have a soft spot for romantic poetry. I can not really express those type of emotions, so you kind of did it for me.


On Wednesday August 30th, 2006, An Expired Member (15) writes:
The rhyme and rhythm flowed were nicely. Some lines were a little awkward, but other than that you did an excellent job. :D


On Wednesday August 30th, 2006, LordBrosnian (66) writes:
finally another worshipper of the ancient...the way poetry was meant to be. Welcome brother. You have won my praise immediately. Hell of an ice breaker. YOUR ON MY FAVORITES! (that doesn't happen much...I'm adamantly bullheaded)


On Wednesday August 30th, 2006, LordBrosnian (66) writes:
Uncanny to an eye untrained of equal'd mastery, These words now brand their sickness pon my soul, beg pardon of my accolade to your relentless art, Rather accept the marvel of my soul...


On Tuesday August 29th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1116) writes:
"my warnings they ignore because/love fools makes of us all." The rhyme scheme to this is simply exquisite, your choice of language bridging the gap between the concept and the ending idea. Beautifully done. I love it. ~*Beth*~


On Tuesday August 29th, 2006, Alanarchy (1627) writes:
Wow. This was very nice. Flowed like a river. Great choice of words. Alot of top notch lines, too many to quote. Wonderful images and sentiments. I loved this one. Write the hell on.


On Tuesday August 29th, 2006, An Expired Member (45) writes:
I like this poem. You're a very good writer. It was sad and beautiful.



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