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short & bittersweet XII

onto my isle of solitude you`ve built a thousand bridges
when quiet rest nigh healed my heart you`ve ripped out all my stitches
what once was barely beating now bursts with a thunderous roar
and i, sails set for farther shores, remain as broken as before...

~ RhymeBound

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On Friday September 19th, 2008, Lolita (121) writes:

You're a sailor on an endlessly lonely sea, it seems. How it breaks my heart.

On Saturday August 30th, 2008, Distorted_Reality (131) writes:

the isle of solitude line struck me in particular it was a good comparison for lonliness...something in which I totally relate ...and interesting flow, but smooth and perfect rhyming as always...well keep them coming you should know that I always come to you when I feel the need to read :)

On Thursday August 28th, 2008, carlosjackal (1717) writes:

So bittersweet, yet I keep wringing out as much positivity from this as I can from this. Digging it :) -Carl

On Thursday August 28th, 2008, carlosjackal (1717) writes:

*delete*the 2nd "from this". Oh, the shame! :D

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