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though but one word, a "no", was spoken
your silence changed from that before
as if it lay forever broken
and silence silent was no more...

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On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, wilted (306) writes:
"and silence silent was no more..." This line in particular catches my attention, thought provoking, really. I can only guess what your inspiration was for this, but I like it that way.


On Friday February 8th, 2008, An Expired Member (40) writes:
The last (so far) is the best. I really liked this one. The last 2 lines hit you like a heart attack, and really leaves an impression. I really stopped to think about this one... thanks you!


On Sunday January 20th, 2008, Lolita (121) writes:
I had to ponder the last line for a few seconds. This is great.


On Tuesday January 15th, 2008, Narcissa (724) writes:
That one word broke my silence and changed my world. This piece rolled off my tongue and smacked me in the face. Powerful Indeed!


On Monday January 14th, 2008, Aunty Depressant (662) writes:
A bit of a mind twist. Such power for such a small word.


On Monday January 14th, 2008, Kui (703) writes:
"as if it lay forever broken and silence silent was no more..." *inhales deeply* I'll come back and comment on this when I can think of the proper words to describe the feeling I got from this...-Gin


On Monday January 14th, 2008, Distorted_Reality (131) writes:
*sighs* you amaze me. I probably told you that by now, but it's as true now as ever. Brilliantly worded and so true. Sometimes silence is better :(



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