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her eyes the moon, her breath the sky,
her thoughts the swallows flying by.
her lips the land, her laughter rain,
but nothing of her may remain...

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On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, wilted (306) writes:
Nice little twist at the end.


On Friday February 8th, 2008, An Expired Member (40) writes:
Ah... This one's kind of eerie. Deep dark and depressing. I liked it though. Liking your style more and more....


On Monday January 28th, 2008, italianbella (275) writes:
beautiful I love these short powerful writes


On Sunday January 20th, 2008, Instant Insanity (727) writes:
Thats pretty damn good and deep:-D . Its funny because I've thought the last line up a few times myself. good job. ][ ][


On Wednesday October 31st, 2007, Mahakala (255) writes:
why?


On Monday August 27th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (662) writes:
Though the comparisons are thought out well, a composite of her beauty being, there bodes a heartbreaking tale to tell, as you write of these things fleeing.


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, ShardsofSilence (325) writes:
god damn.


On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, NikesRain (1422) writes:
lovely indeed... last line dropped my heart though... nicely done


On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Lolita (121) writes:
So pretty. Like everything else you write.


On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Guillotine (223) writes:
Once again, you've shattered me with something as eloquently worded and beautiful as this. Thanks for another amazing write. Luke.


On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Preacher X (58) writes:
Very nice RB, flows well.


On Wednesday August 15th, 2007, Mylissa (1056) writes:
oh lovely...nature is our beauty!



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