DarkPoetry -|- i tremble -|- fuck your disease.

fuck your disease.

you words
are laden with
cancerous undertones.

the rattle of
uncertainty lingers
upon your
vile breath
as you
showcase your
disease behind
glass eyes.

just so
you know,

your farewell
speech has
no great,
life-alternating
effect on
me.

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On Saturday February 2nd, 2008, Syringe (72) writes:

i like it. very succint..maliciously honest

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, dying angel (1328) writes:

your always so straight forward in the most crushing way. and i can't help but wear a smirk after reading this.

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, unspeakable truth (146) writes:

I like this, direct, to the point. Cold, not sure. Might have to think on that.

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:

Very cold indeed, but you said what you needed to say

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Sharon Rose (662) writes:

whoop...that was to the point..nice.

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, SaraJane (40) writes:

This was nice, well nicley written but the poem it's self was very cold.:)

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, blue (1749) writes:

not very poetic, but the message is clear I guess. ~b

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Six-Out (1827) writes:

hah. I loved this. such a slap to the face. you're quite the poet.

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

even though the stanzas are short this has lots of impact, although the personal message is lost on me, but the word choice is somehow whisperingly fierce....very nicely scathing

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

gha!!!!!!! i asked and i received! doesnt i just urk you, the whole fall out of whatever? this stirkes me as strong, and the obviously blunt tone made me think of a pivited feet in the dirt, a strong stance...

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

man you ramble!!

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

what can i say? im a ramblin man, magic man :)

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

revision fist line *it just urk you*

On Tuesday May 15th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

maybe stabbing a snake? take the pieces you want from him/her and leave the rest, but dont forget to learn, so in that respect, i hope there will be some effect. things will get better kiddo, life is full of curve balls.

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