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"I'm playing Santa
at a party tomorrow,"
he told me in his
low, often trembling voice.

"That's nice of you,"
I replied,
while cleaning off the
dirty table
 where he had
decided to sit
after all.

"Yes, it is,"
he said without
looking at me.
"It's nice to feel wanted,
isn't it?"

I almost dropped
the plate that I
had taken off of his table
as I look at him
in surprise.

It was eerie how
easily that one
sentence
had struck such
a sensitive cord
within me.

Completely oblivious
to how much his
words had
affected me,
he said,
"Could I
have some pancakes?"





[This was inspired by a regular at my work. He's the sweetest old man that you'll ever meet and he comes in every Sunday. I have never learned his name, but I call him Smiley and he calls me Shy.]



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On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
thats why i head to dive bars and not dancey dance crap clubs... you meet the most interesting, seasoned, people with so many stories... trully makes me appreciate meeting people, because it seems that people my age, only have the same things to say over and over and over and over again.


On Friday January 4th, 2008, Sketso (533) writes:
*insert humble applause here*


On Tuesday December 25th, 2007, Nill (167) writes:
Yum. Epiphanies with a side order of i.HOp


On Tuesday December 25th, 2007, Lynaes (1125) writes:
This is amazing.. I've had moments like this.. just one thing that someone says that has a big impact on you internally.. and they have no idea. Brilliant.


On Tuesday December 25th, 2007, DowngradeBeauty (50) writes:
this caused goose bumps! Good show!


On Tuesday December 25th, 2007, Narcissa (688) writes:
This reminds me that its the simple things that this holiday is all about - I sure envy those who can cherish the simple pleaseure of christmas. beautiful write.


On Tuesday December 25th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (687) writes:
A wonderful illustration to bring insight to such a common, but often ignored aspect of being human.


On Monday December 24th, 2007, Sharon Rose (658) writes:
This was extremely touching. Funny, how little experiences can shape us more than big ones, sometimes. You conveyed the moment and it's impact perfectly.


On Monday December 24th, 2007, RubyXero (454) writes:
ouch. i can understand that reaction. especially depending on the situation. this was simple yet intense.


On Monday December 24th, 2007, Army Barbie (491) writes:
Awww how darling.


On Monday December 24th, 2007, italianbella (281) writes:
I really enjoyed this read it truely is amazing how easily off gaurd we could be taken just by a few words...great write hon:)


On Monday December 24th, 2007, Saint Ebb (77) writes:
That's sweet.


On Monday December 24th, 2007, Six-Out (1822) writes:
This was marvelous.



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