Dark Poetry - Proudly Publishing Poems Prose And People's Priceless Poetry
"my very own personal savior." by i tremble

Dark Poetry Home

Log In

Random Poetry


You are my personal savior.

I rid myself of anything personal
and pin all of my pain,
physical, or otherwise, upon you
and you wear it like some
life-size humanoid voodoo doll.

I nail your dirty hands
to my faded green,
wall-paper-peeling
bedroom wall
and throw darts
dipped in
negative emotion
at your grotesquely large head.

You won’t tell a soul
what goes on between us.
You know better.

You can never say
that I treat you badly.

I only beat you
when I feel as though
you may turn on me
and reveal my
innermost secrets to
some stranger
who passes by the
open window,
or worse,
to someone who
knows me well and
may use it against me.

Hell, I even made
you a crown of
the sharpest barbwire
I could find.

Still, you will not squirm.
You will not cry.

You will not scream,
let alone make
minuscule, nearly inaudible
guttural sounds that
could somehow be mistaken
for words of complaint.

You know better.

Who else has
a savior
that is trained so well?




Copying this work to another webpage without author permission is plagiarism.
Plagiarism is a misdemeanor, usually punishable by fines of $100-$50000 and up to one year in jail.




If you [Log In] as a member you can discuss this work with others

On Sunday August 5th, 2007, dying angel (1344) writes:
this is different from what you usually write. it's always good to experiment. " I nail your dirty hands to my faded green, wall-paper-peeling bedroom wall and throw darts dipped in negative emotion at your grotesquely large head."...to me, this f


On Sunday August 5th, 2007, dying angel (1344) writes:
this felt like self-hatred. that's what i take from it, i guess it's because i've been this way lately.


On Friday August 3rd, 2007, Six-Out (1826) writes:
heh. the title brings it all together so well. I wouldn't say it's your best yet, because you write some amazing stuff, but it's definitely good. :)



Navigation for Text Browsers
Things to Read  Home  Copyright Policy  Bugs


Owned and operated by GeniusWeb.com LLC


© 1996-2008 Matthew Steven
You must agree to our terms of service in order to to access this site

Need help? Reach us on the poetry site resource page.



Printed from www.DarkPoetry.com/dp/13719/101148 on Saturday August 30th, 2008 09:56 AM

Certain elements © 1996-2008 Matthew Steven (matts.org)