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Venus Beat Overdrive

my

feet

goes

tap

tap tap tap

tap tap tap tap tap

tap tap tap tap

tap

because there goes
the percussion eyes
flashing blue-electric
swinging to your beatiful
strides in saxophone sex beats
im nearing acheron in
erotic overdrive

..ooooh...

...oohohh....

you are a private venus
as we rendezvous
i want to taste you
lick you, love you
can you see my smile
against your lies
be mine mon amour

...be mine...

tap

tap tap tap

tap tap tap tap tap

tap tap tap tap

tap

my

heart

just

stopped

pretty soon we'll be there

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On Monday November 20th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

"the percussion eyes flashing blue-electric" I love the rhythm & beat of this poem... and the title is fantastic. There's a certain Mona Lisa painted touch to this one. Well done.

On Monday November 13th, 2006, The Fool (1003) writes:

OOO!!!!!!!! Tetch! Your incredible.. You made my heart beat my mind race.. My palms sweat and my world spin!....~Gothic

On Monday November 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

ummm, oh yeah, uhhuh. You rock!

On Sunday November 12th, 2006, dying angel (1343) writes:

oh my god....

On Sunday November 12th, 2006, blue (1749) writes:

=) I dig it, yup. ~b

On Sunday November 12th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

an overture of wordplay wonders....offbeat as Aim suggests but highly captivating and rhythmic in many senses: tapped!!

On Sunday November 12th, 2006, mozarts cat (270) writes:

'the percussion eyes flashing blue-electric swinging to your beatiful strides' offbeat and gorgeous ..

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