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"A Laissez-faire Affair" by Rebel_not_Radical

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The crescent moon was dialed against
The starry skied tempest, restless
Asking directions from my wrist watch



"hey, hey..."
it whispered in ethereal mists to me



Becaused I traversed paradoxically
In the universe streets of infinity
Zipper in boots and loose change in faded jeans
Jingle like happy fools on lunatical elation


If I breath enough maybe my
Chest cavity will burst out with laughs
So I sniffed some more milky way stars
Or did I light another cigarette from mardi gras


But I think i'll walk on by bit-by-bit
Sometimes life seems to get us down
And I want to stop living in my dream
A dream of ultramarine



"hey, hey..."
it licked some words in my ears



~"Go ahead lay down dead"~
Because I want to pass on by







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On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
"Asking directions from my wrist watch" Psychedelic, trippy, eccentric off-the-wall and just wasy cool...i felt like floating in a stick of bubble gum. A love when poetry workds like this: like paintings! Nice.


On Monday September 18th, 2006, K_Love (688) writes:
Your talent always shines through, your words so uniquely different and I love your style and the imagery you paint so beautiful. "If I breathe enough maybe my chest cavity will burst out with laughs"


On Monday September 18th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
I wish I could spend a day with you and your thoughts. This is so great Tetch hun. Awesome piece... Julia~


On Monday September 18th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
love this vant garde drunken vibe here; the moons slurs and the acid trip surrealness or even magic realist essencehovering like milky way mist....more than cool, off the chart cool!!


On Monday September 18th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
let do, let go, let pass...free trade free verse? You're an original talent and very cool for 16...I like what I see pal - too cool!!


On Monday September 18th, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:
The rhythm of this piece is fantastic, I especially liked the fourth stanza... Ciao, T/S


On Monday September 18th, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:
I very much like the quote on your homepage, as well - "The first man to compare a woman's cheek to a rose is a poet; the second one was an idiot"...no truer words written...



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