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I Waltz To The Beat of Your Fire

If the world was choreographed
We'd be perfect
We'd be lost in each other's
Arm in an eternal ballet

But sadly, it is not...

And we would fall like figurines
Dirtying the earth
Everytime our clay-dust shatters

But If I was the one who made missteps
Forgive me
I really wouldnt want to stain those
Little pretty glass-slippers
It glows of such moonbeams
That I would be blood-letting
If I saw it greasy...

We would twirl and my hair
matted my eyes like the night-curtain
So it could malicously hide my boyish emotions

I treasured and crushed your curves in my arms

You seem irritated...

(but secretly I liked it and hid my grins)

I foolishly reason-out that it's
Because of your gyroscopic dance steps
That can manuever a thousand fleet of love's battleship

The deadliest weapons, they wield...

Your beautiful soul burning in fire...

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On Thursday September 21st, 2006, Bluegirl (247) writes:

OOh, I found myself reading this over and over. It makes me feel quite dreamy. :> Excellent!

On Sunday August 27th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

How ever do you do it? *sits in awe* once more! *Bravo* dear. Julia~

On Saturday August 26th, 2006, Anth (1611) writes:

i adore that first verse and the ideas in this, i could read it over and over

On Saturday August 26th, 2006, Solace (1425) writes:

Wondrous piece, overtones of desire and destitute moments, the face that launched a thousand ships, was not a face but a soul...I like that idea far more...wonderful

On Saturday August 26th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:

this was like being in the nutcracker suite for peotry my man,. swirling passions and icandescent glows...beautifully rendered, timelessly exquisite..bucko!! Very lush - Col.

On Saturday August 26th, 2006, Collective Amnesia (243) writes:

great write, the whole thing was just wonderful. "So it could malicously hide my boyish emotions" that line was just perfect ~Tamara

On Friday August 25th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:

"You seem irritated...(but secretly I liked it and hid my grins)" that line made me smile. great write.

On Friday August 25th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:

Dear god this was beautiful...*sighs* Tis was something magcial to breathe in I followed the dance wanting to be there, it felt so heartshattering real. ~Gothic

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