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A Rockstar's Ranting, The Acid Orchestra

*plug in the magic amplifier and pluck
me some tunes out of thin airrr*

-introoo-

Revolving guitars in my head...
in my head...
in my head..

-strums to an oscillating beat and
shifts from chord to chord-

Speak to me...
In gasping breaths...

If you have a damn gun between your teeth
Can you still speak fluently you bitch?

-power chord-
Now you're dead.

-power chord-
Now you're dead..

-POWEEERR CHORDD-
NOW YOU'RE FUCKING DEAD!!!

-soft drum beats of indie musicality
quickly shifting to a fortissimo of brutality-

Embalm me with fire.......

Argh no no no no no no no no no...

NO!!!!

IT FUCKING BURRRNSSS!!!

-the underlying bass line which started minutes ago
was menacingly grim, like the fingers which plays it-

I regurgitate a mouthful of la-la's
And moan like thousands of children crying
Damn! My innards were dying

-And the instruments swoon to the metronome
of destruction...and they are in harmonic acid-

-hmmmm.........acid-

*and I smack my lips with satiation spiked with supression*

I've always wanted to destroy something so pure and beatiful...

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On Monday April 16th, 2007, stormtalk (909) writes:

haha. neat.

On Sunday February 4th, 2007, Zen (629) writes:

i like gasping

On Sunday February 4th, 2007, Zen (629) writes:

i like the gasping breaths part

On Friday August 25th, 2006, swing_the_hammer (76) writes:

this was really cool. i totally dig it. L

On Thursday August 24th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

I think this screams with energy and a force within you. Great job describing such rage! ;) I'm partial to your softer pieces, but variety is always a good thing! Julia~

On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, Alanarchy (1600) writes:

Pretty cool. Felt like I was at the show. Great work.

On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, The Fool (1002) writes:

This was just incredible it gave me chills*nods* Dang I got goosebumps from reading this, the glorious images*sighs* Just magnificent.

On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, gbuff69 (212) writes:

Either I'm a dork, or tired from work... or this is just f-in sad.

On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, dying angel (1340) writes:

i liked this a lot. especially the ending. this would make a badass song.

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