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"The Painting I Have Kissed" by Rebel_not_Radical

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In your blank smile
I paint by meaningless pigments
unto this parched canvas
The quintessence

.....Of love.....

.....Of lust.....

.....Of deception.....

.....Of trust.....

And when my voluptous easel moves
With graceful force of a lava rush
A volley of colored bullets fired
From cossacks' blunderbuss
Fall down wasted on the wounded ground

.........So i..........
....................
................

....*blurghk*....

................
....................
.....Cough the bloody mary I drank to.....
...Use as my impromptu color red...



...So please shut up...
Dont argue with my drunken reasoning
Never is a poet done immortalizing
Neither will the work be less burdening



And yet in this moment of a Herculean task

.....I broke down.....

....Forgive me....









....I stole a moment from your lips....





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On Wednesday August 23rd, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:
Damn. You just stole mine too. Amazing is all I can say hun.


On Tuesday August 22nd, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1160) writes:
tetchy, i won't rest until you've upgraded. this was so amazing..you really captured the feeling here.."A volley of colored bullets fired From cossacks' blunderbuss Fall down wasted on the wounded ground" fabulous images. i love this.


On Tuesday August 22nd, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (159) writes:
~well i have, i think its not yet finished or some problem messed it up...o well


On Tuesday August 22nd, 2006, dying angel (1343) writes:
"I stole a moment from your lips." i could taste and smell the alcohol and sense the drunk feeling to this. you painted a picture in my mind more beautiful than any Da Vinci.


On Tuesday August 22nd, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
"Never is a poet done immortalizing" Sometimes I'll stand in a museum, stare at a piece, like Picasso or some unknown, and have no clue... yet, there is something. So I keep looking, searching for that inner 'blurghk!', whch could mean anything. Suddenly


On Tuesday August 22nd, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
... I'll see the eyes, the paint strokes, the lips, or mistakes which are far more perfect. This is one of those paintings... Well done.



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