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I don't know anymore
Life is pulling apart at the seems,
like a shirt stretched to far.
No threads left to bind me together;
pulled, broken and tired.

A blade digging deep into the wrist
Hoping for "God" to intervene,
asking for forgiveness.
In all the damnation and darkness
that surrounds me "he" offered no guidance.

There is one bright beacon of light.
You may let me slip and fall,
but never let me hit the jagged rocks.

You are my goddess, a star that crashed
comely into my chaotic life.
What else can I say?

My creator failed me and the scars remain,
but you saved me from me.



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On Saturday January 27th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:
'you may let me slip and fall, but never let me hit the jagged rocks ' love it!


On Tuesday January 23rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
ill agree with masked, but without the long pauses


On Friday January 5th, 2007, GraveFlower (383) writes:
wow........anthony,,,,thats beautiful....personaly, i am athiest, i dont believe theres a "god" or just...doesnt matter, this is definatly my favorite,,,,,beautiful hun....holy shit.......wonderful! ~*dani*~


On Friday January 5th, 2007, anakronistik_me (41) writes:
it makes me regret some things...mostly being a coward. beautiful. _- nakro -_


On Thursday August 10th, 2006, Anoblechicken (58) writes:
the last line is so powerful you saved me from me... wonderful


On Thursday August 10th, 2006, Arianna (192) writes:
if this is indicative of your style, and the way your thoughts spill on to paperless time, DP has gained something special. this is intensely real...beautiful ~jb


On Thursday August 10th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
wow. i will certainly be looking for more. welcome to DP.


On Thursday August 10th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1064) writes:
yes, this is definately a well-thought out, well-portrayed piece. "You may let me slip and fall,/but never let me hit the jagged rocks." You are definately one I'll be waiting for more from. Great write, and welcome. ~*Beth*~


On Thursday August 10th, 2006, lstdarkness (34) writes:
Thanks guys! Tis an older piece a lot more will come in the next couple days! I will check out work soon!


On Thursday August 10th, 2006, evolve (2246) writes:
"My creator failed me and the scars remain, but you saved me from me." Simply beautiful. The idea that faith can be instilled in love, rather than in a sentient being. This is excellent. Welcome to DarkPoetry.


On Thursday August 10th, 2006, Alanarchy (1691) writes:
"You are my goddess, a star that crashed comely into my chaotic life." Beautiful. It's good to have the person in our lives that keep us grounded, and happy. I really enjoyed this, man. Welcom to DP, And Write the hell on.



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