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She means this

my mind aflame with jubilee
your breath is cold tonight
feel the hatred running free
my face ensnared with fright

love me with thine heart and soul
you know the man I play
the gate is up, I've paid the toll
and now I'm here to stay

rainbows of feelings betray the mind
I cannot care alone
t'aked with me and left behind
you then begin to moan

this is't the path I chose for you
our love is something more
the soft prick of a rose for you
will enlighten to our core

the feeling now is absolute
the feeling now is final
your love for me I retribute
but will you walk the aisle?

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On Wednesday July 16th, 2003, AshtrayDirt (41) writes:

i like.

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

this is deep darling. even in it's simplicity..I love it..~Vel~

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:

ah, good catch at the end. make sure you edit and spell check more carefully. also, the sentence structure flips between modern and antiquated. try to stick with just one at a time..

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