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Distortion

You dont remember me
But I remember you
How could I forget
I gave up everything thing for you

But it was nothing but a faded memory
I show you love and I get nothing
How could you have treated me that way
You ruled my world, my existence unwhole without you

My soul shattered my will bent
You distorted and disfigured me
Made me what I was once again
A creature no one can love

My blood boiled
My heart beat
All charged to release it
Ready for his arrival

You made him have form
You created him from nothing inside me
You scream his name because you want him not me
Even all I feel you dont care

You want him
You want your master
Someone defiling and degrading you
Day after day for joy

I was to soft to make you happy
He is harsh and cruel
And you lust for him
You love who you think I am

You love Seru
My hatred
My pain
My lust
My evil....

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On Wednesday October 24th, 2007, Distorted_Reality (149) writes:

yeah the first to lines was from a song well even so it was very well written and I enjoyed it

On Monday July 3rd, 2006, TheArtOfX (105) writes:

The first two lines was in an evanescense song by the way.. in Taking Over Me. Good song, and brilliant poetry man. I read it slowly, then read it again to make sure I understood. The third stanza stood out to me personally.. good job, keep it up man :)

On Thursday June 29th, 2006, An Expired Member (38) writes:

i love the whole thing, but i love the "loving him" part about the monster. all i can say is woah...

On Saturday June 24th, 2006, l mo (63) writes:

::applauds:: ~night

On Monday June 19th, 2006, kiss of the dark (43) writes:

Wow Jonathan!! Great job...it takes me back...

On Sunday June 18th, 2006, An Expired Member (19) writes:

I think I have lived this... Nice capture-of-moment.

On Sunday June 18th, 2006, Ashlar (257) writes:

wow... this is totally what i was feeling when i broke up with my mistake... but *cough* umm still sorta feeling like this... i swear some ppl just so totally suck and i will not take him back... well anywho i wish i could put this on my fav list but i ca

On Sunday June 18th, 2006, Ashlar (257) writes:

*cant

On Friday June 16th, 2006, Mathesix (67) writes:

this is good, but in a general sort of way.. I don't know, I mean, yeah I understand, but I don't really feel it. Sorry if I'm sounding harsh, but I'm just trying to be constructive. I enjoy critism of my works, so I'm sorry if you don't..but this was ver

On Friday June 16th, 2006, Mathesix (67) writes:

very good for a first post. Welcome to DP and don't let my words dissuade you..you have talent...-Josh

On Thursday June 15th, 2006, Silence (5) writes:

Thanks. But what song by them?

On Thursday June 15th, 2006, dying angel (1344) writes:

this reminded me of this one song by evanescence. i love that band. good job.

On Wednesday June 14th, 2006, abaddon (42) writes:

hmmmm, very interesting to say the least, but quite good. welcome to dp.

On Monday June 12th, 2006, Angels Babydoll (66) writes:

You already know what I think about this but I love it all the more. Welcome to DP my friend.

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