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"I sit and cry" by AnGeLbLuEyEs1201

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I sit and cry you don’t hear me
I stand and scream you don’t hear me
I want to die and you don’t see me
I want to love you, you don’t see me
I hand you my heart you don’t feel it
I give you my soul you don’t feel it
I say I hate you now you hear me
I cut my wrist now you see me
I die in your arms now you feel me
I had to kill myself for you to notice
I have my blood on your hands
Now you hear, see, and feel what I felt
You hear my pain loud and clear
You see my blood bright and red
You feel my life drain slowly and painfully
Now you will always know what I felt.




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On Tuesday October 3rd, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:
it still tares me apart... i needed this angst because i am in a depressing mood... im thinking anger may help.. its still a great write


On Thursday May 18th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:
damn.. this is good... for that person to just see and you want them to know how badly you feel, and they just don't know.. and then to show them that it could be somebody elses life if they don't bother to look... this is amazing.. its definatly a fav.


On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:
hmmmmmm *ponders the reversal in perspective* well, I love the concept... but I would prefer (and this matters not, so please nevermind) you killing him and then him knowing how you feel ;)~ very enticing twist of pov


On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:
kinda reminds me of 'this love' by pantera.. 'i'd kill my self for you, I'd kill you for myself' (I prefer the latter half of the chiasmus


On Wednesday May 10th, 2006, TornPaperDoll (75) writes:
i love the first half up to "i die in your arms now you feel me" this half is very strong and vivid the end kinda loses me...but nice work.ima read more of u.TPD



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