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Tame me the blue murder moon
A crime of syllables - death rattled sonnets.
The leather gloved villain, weapon under the bonnet
This yellowed buff poem
Stalks like a Roman soldier, with the killer's instinct
With a fiendish format for blood; eyes of Argento
And sex kitten exploitations; slasher's opera
A grandiose Grand Guignol, those French
Are like bread, raised for a full feed
Of greed, gore and gratuitous galores
Zut alors! But this one's tough as a Sicilian
Mafia mobster, hard nut like a Brazilian
(But it's not African!)
It's cousin to the Spaghetti Western: entrails of bloody
Aftermath souping the scene: a child with a spoon
Made for flicking, decorating the screen, or the walls
With more splatter; psycho-drama
Where it's crystallised plumage flashes fierce
With a killer's knife, the merciless plunge;
Hacked off limbs in a dactyl sliced, syllabic grunge
And grime; low budget crime; atmospheric
As a Hitchcockian suspense
Sleazy as a prostitute's den.
The giallo poem is wisps of grey velvet -
Four flies flittting to the flight of deadly death.
It's bravo for the Bava and the bloody bravado
The black lace smooth, the masked murderer's grooves
The poets that knew too much
Dead by dawn, deep red sunsets
Decapitating rhymes, like shafts
Of light, verse in murderess elevators
Going down, like a whore for a target
In a parking lot.




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On Sunday August 10th, 2008, downstream (113) writes:
i felt like your style in this poem was simplier than your usual work, but provided the same provocative, splendid images. I felt like there was a specific feeling/thought/mood you were experiencing when you wrote this - and it was expressed in murderously captivating poetics - leaves me kind of mentally and emotionally stuck in a moment - more like several moments all in one - hmmm. As usual, *bows before an artist* ~Susu~


On Sunday August 10th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
thanx Susu...this was loosely inspired by the 'Giallo' Italian flicks that directors like Argento and Mario Bava were famous (or more so infamous) for! So it's chock-loaded with references to verious movies and icons...plus 'Italian' references like Roman, et al...and I think if my research is correct it came out of the Grand Guignol stage performances of the late 1800s. 'Giallo' is also Italian for 'yellow':D Merci buckets!


On Sunday August 10th, 2008, downstream (113) writes:
aaaaahhhhh - my ignorance has been enlighted - makes it an even more interesting read :)


On Thursday April 17th, 2008, RubyXero (460) writes:
wow. perfect ending i thought. as throughout.a detective murderous,descriptive plot. sneaky alleyways. lovely imagery and similes. yes. excellent.


On Sunday April 13th, 2008, saintedmad (1165) writes:
and back again. ..feels like a snippet of time or a day in the mind of a straightjacket hero, with all that spackle.tacular verbage and splattered scenarios in the ghetto'd barrios. .. all that slightly off.your.rocker rockin' internal rhyme scheme, a maddening beat and frenzy to it. ..sometimes you are so far to the left from my romanticized right that i feel completely tumbling lost in your words, but thats just precisely the joy of reading you; that helter skelter ride...and that ending so gutteral so in the gutter so gutted and left splayed open. . . you are maniacally amazing. ~ness


On Friday April 11th, 2008, saintedmad (1165) writes:
EGADS!!! disengage::: i will come back to this...but after the first five lines...i think i need a bloodbath....seriously entangling. back for another bite later. .


On Friday April 11th, 2008, Sanctuary (84) writes:
As always my friend, a master with the written word. I havent been here in a while, and its nice to come back and see a friendly face continuing his tradition of great work.


On Thursday April 10th, 2008, Narcissa (718) writes:
Zut alors! Damn is right! what a trip down the hole once again..never a dull journey with you!


On Wednesday April 9th, 2008, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
Fuck. Can't drop the word. Well, what do I do, what do I say? This is crack'a lackin. One of my favorites from you. Love your sense of humour, and how hard it bites the reader.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2008, blue (1749) writes:
Colin, you're an alien. Crikey! "Scilician" I think you spelled that wrong though. rawr.


On Thursday April 10th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:
heh....you nerdy trainspotter! I think I cleared it up, no? Thanks Mr.Crikey!


On Wednesday April 9th, 2008, Guillotine (228) writes:
You're sneaking new works in on me Col? Not on my watch. Good to see you have inspiration again! Look forward to reading more mate, enjoyed this. Something different in this.


On Wednesday April 9th, 2008, heartdripsblack (758) writes:
a touch of everything. yet so perfect. ~ hdb.



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