fukkingfabulous. i don't even have the words to form an expression INSIDE of my tongue nevermind on the tip of it...but my appreciation for your style of writing and your way you paint it all so piercingly---abounds---

An atmospheric carousel ride. Brilliant.

Word! Well done, felt like going on a ride.

the internal vortex of rhyme curls around a spine:: "protoplasmic bliss/ helter-skelter promise/ a particle kiss/ evangelist/ reflecting this" refracting your genius, breaking into myraid prisms of semi.conductor trains of thought. ... this gnashes some fairly gnarly teeth indeed, a whirling dervish of neo.gothicism; somehow feels like charlie manson is laughing in the margins. ....and i love how it all just ---stopped. }{----ness

I saw the title and thought, Colin! And the piece? Pure Hatter magic :)

I get caught up in your language. "or the rhetoric overload of an evangelist." Very cool. Preach on.

"Love is a misused word caught in the rapid teeth of a snarl-up like pumas in a particle kiss" I truly love that line.

interesting... quite the counter clockwise motion of circular words... pen in palm.. warm.. ion excited heat. always a fav Magic Man;)