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This lad turns around to look back at me
He wears a sooty shirt, folded up to sleeves
He used to be a boxer;
He first hit
Then talked.
But that evening, he just smiled at me.

He is tired.
Of caring about the “crowd”
Of sleeping solo
Of fostering his family
Of bated breathings; he is dying every day.
But that day, he just lived with me.

He loves me
He holds on to me when he loses his job
He holds me dear when he loses his friend
He says he’s sorry that night…
He reaches out for my hand, to grab him
But that night, I just did not .

Today, he disappears in the crowd;
thanking me for teaching him how to love
unrequited.

Today, he says he might not be alive tomorrow
we might not be able to see each other again.
I say “you’re hiding something”
He says, “yes”.
And that moment, he just left my hand and walked away.




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On Friday July 7th, 2006, An Expired Member (16) writes:
the mystery behind this...i say "you're hiding something" he says "yes" made me think about this work long after i read the last line...


On Tuesday July 4th, 2006, inexperienced (43) writes:
Well, actually I dont like Hemmigway and I do not read much of him.But it's strange that we both went through similar experiences and feelings..


On Sunday July 2nd, 2006, BloodySparrow (63) writes:
you've read Earnest Hemmingway, this reminds me of him (though his is longer) "Teahing him how to love unrequited" then "he might now be alive tomorrow" he's killing him self from love unrequited (I think)


On Thursday June 29th, 2006, Ainsof (1866) writes:
ooooo... this is indescribably sublime... there is something missing here, and that makes all the difference... captivating, enticing, and so very carefully suggestive with strategic omission... I love the absence here!


On Tuesday June 27th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1021) writes:
You have that something, that something special that glows and shines from within. this was amazing hun. Just wow. Julia~


On Monday June 26th, 2006, Alanarchy (1698) writes:
"Thanking me for teaching him how to love unrequited" Loved those lines. This had a purity I can't define. Good job.



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