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erotica

At night, all through my body

This storm breaks out

  Tearing my soul in parts

   Calling out your name

    A message is all you see

     In a small frame

      By digital letters

      With a mechanical tone

      Although my heart is torn apart

     I already washed my hair

    I already wore your favorite dress

   I already packed my stuff up

  I know it is just not gonna happen

I know that it is just not enough.

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On Sunday July 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1659) writes:

This was loaded and electric, full of desire. Brilliant write. -Carl

On Sunday March 25th, 2007, Enigma (126) writes:

Good work. I like it.

On Wednesday July 19th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

This is something I believe all of us as women do... and it's sad that we can't dress us to please us instead! This was a powerful piece hun. *faves* Julia~

On Wednesday July 19th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

up to* I shoulda faved this the first time... ;) Brilliant.

On Wednesday May 24th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:

Excellent.

On Monday May 22nd, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:

A teasing piece I had to have another bite at the cherry (no jokes) and I look foward to some more inexperienced works. Good luck with exam results.

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:

and the reference to the storm really turned me on a kind of electrical charge like bodies sexing under midnights fiery skies - wow!!

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:

ha ha - just laughing at Ainsof's comments talk about being broke in gently to DP - charming, lol! Anyways this poem had a subtle silky feel to it like getting tangled up in sheets.

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Omg- Do I know & feel those words! You wrote, what I think, we all feel but cannot express the way you just did so perfectly! Julia~

On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, Graveyard_Desciple (49) writes:

i agree. a great piece of writing if i must say. and i too welcome you

On Monday May 8th, 2006, inexperienced (44) writes:

thankx! :) my lack of experience does not refer to that (!) hopefully..

On Monday May 8th, 2006, Ainsof (1838) writes:

I must admit... a poem called 'erotica' by a person with a screen name 'inexperienced' made me laugh at first... but this is much more than any one word can describe.. very nice and welcome to dp ;)

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