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Brand New Chasm (Version Upgrade)

Slide deep
Deep into that beautiful abyss
Take a look around
You just might miss

The sights
The sounds
The colors
The bliss

The mentality
Of all that surrounds

The touch of lips
The kiss

Amazingly erotic
Stunning
Sexy

To touch you
See you
Breathe you
To feel you

Soft fingers
Caressing motions

Gentle breezes
Dictating emotions

The essence of two
Entwined
Jigsaw pieces
Combined

See the big picture
Of a chasm...with an end.

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On Saturday July 1st, 2006, Sin (1622) writes:

...this was captivating...breathtaking...stunning ~kristy

On Friday November 14th, 2003, DarkDruidess (195) writes:

this is really good...I'm impressed...I am literally at a loss for words...incredible

On Friday November 14th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:

*nods* You don't bring it ofter, but when you do, you blow me away. Great job Peter.

On Friday November 14th, 2003, sole (114) writes:

Yeah I have to agree with Drea, that line just drove the poem home. Enjoyed it.

On Friday November 14th, 2003, Exodus (210) writes:

cool..

On Friday November 14th, 2003, Drea (917) writes:

"The essence of two Entwined Jigsaw pieces Combined " wow.. this is a great work.. ~Drea~

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