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All Seeing Eyes

you don’t know me
like you think you do
you don’t know me
like I know you

you don’t love me
but you think you do
you don’t love me
the way I love you

I still don’t know you
the way I wanted to
but still I see
I see right through

you don’t know me
like I know you

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On Thursday September 7th, 2006, fushigi no kaosu (88) writes:

oh so creeply enthralling! this one of going to be faved for sure.

On Friday May 12th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

it was eerie I agree the repitious you dont know me/love me etc it had a strange effect on me like being frozen by Medusa's snake hair or something, not suggesting you're Medusa or anything ha ha. It was hauntingly short and sharp damn me!

On Friday May 12th, 2006, Arianna (192) writes:

the story of my life,...i felt this.

On Friday May 12th, 2006, Bridge (353) writes:

mmm, ineteresting. i can totaolly see myself and another person with this. very good

On Thursday May 11th, 2006, Ozymandias (59) writes:

Very eerie. Nice write, I liked it. Welcome to DP! Cant wait to see more from you.

On Thursday May 11th, 2006, An Expired Member (1) writes:

dang thats tight as hell i like it a lot

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