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I made sure the room was dark
Fore when I entered I could see
The beautiful girl
That would soon scream.
She turned to look at me wide eyes
Started shaking like a nervous wreck.
I smiled and she calmed down,
I thought "Man I'm good with who I select."
I softly grazed her pretty face
With my dirty, calloused hand.
She took a deep breath,
Man was she tan.
Naked laying on the table
Strapped down so she couldn't move.
Legs propped up in the air,
I moved across the room.
After I shut the door
I turned on the light.
It blinded me
It was so bright.
Then she took a look around
And saw all of my toys.
She knew I was going to rape her
I've been wanting to rape someone since I was a boy.
Then she saw my instruments
Which I would cut her with.
She started screaming,
She wanted out of this.
By this time I was so hard
I could barely walk.
I moved closely to her
And started to talk.
"This is going to hurt a little,
Please do scream.
And yes I am going to rape you,
No, This is not a dream."
I massaged her pussy
Then pulled out my dick.
I have an STD
And I'm really sick.
But she doesn't know,
And I don't really care.
I banged her so hard
I commed everywhere.
She lay there crying
Apparently depressed.
I'd figured I would leave
And let her rest.
An hour later I came back
I was ready to kill.
I had all my fun,
Now it's time to seal the deal.
I promised her ex
That I would kill her
But only for $10,000
As long as I could torture.
I walked back into the room
Which woke her up.
She started to scream
When I yelled "SHUT UP!"
I pulled out my sharpest blade
And slowly ran it down her chest.
The next place I cut
Was her breasts.
Than I slowly ran the knife
Down her wrists.
She started to cry,
Then her lips I kissed.
I went to her thighs
And slashed at them too.
The blade went so deep
It almost went all of the way through.
She cried in pain
And begged me to stop.
Thank God I'm a cop.
At last I was done
I cut almost every inch of her skin.
Now I pour lemon juice on her
And tell her she must pay for her sins.
I love messing with their minds.
Now she's burning, bleeding, and crying,
I do love it
Watching her dying.
Eventually I slit her throat
And now the deed is done.
Now torturing people is my hobby
Because killing is fun.



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On Sunday January 13th, 2008, Geisha (772) writes:
*lightning comes down from the sky to strike mywristshurt down, but I stand in the way to block it* Awesome ass, fucking write.. It was sick, but damn awesome!-Gin


On Thursday September 20th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (235) writes:
I dont care what anyone one else says i think it fucking rocked. It like made me shiver when i got to the point with lemon juice. lol then again i am a wuss..:P terrific write sweety


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...the idea behind this was phenomenal; it's the effort put into it that fell short...I've noticed that pure death writes without any meaning whatsoever are tough to actually make sound good...


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...a few constructive tips I could give are: make the work flow better to keep a set pace; that will at least help the rhyme scheme a bit, and force you to add a little more detail per line to complete the meter...


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, mywristshurt (525) writes:
i appreciate your comments, but i felt like i took my time on this (it took me a couple of days) and this was one of my more detailed poems.. but i thank you for your input


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...others would be to incorporate some sort of reason behind the aforementioned killing spree; I say this not to attack, but from experience...each 'kill you' write I've done without a particular reason kinda blew, regardless the effort I put forth...


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...I truly believe to really catch the minds of readers, even in the most morbid of subject matter, when there is purpose, things just sound that much better...I wish you luck, and I'll be keeping an eye on you as much as I can from now on...


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, SilentStalker (1360) writes:
...remember, purpose has many meanings...motive and desire being some of the top ones...I could care less about using cliche lines; hell, I do it all the time, and no one seems top care...as long as they're placed well, you needn't worry one bit...


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, glasshouse (802) writes:
Darun you are my hero. If you were here, I'd make out with you so hard for all of that. haha. You fucking genius. (good tips, btw. i second them as if it matters)--Jes


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:
still a dark write dude. And it has the words pussy and dick in it.. nasty stuff going on here


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Gold Dust Woman (186) writes:
I have to agree with Bella on this, no offense or anything but this does remind me of a few horror movies that I have watched. or heard of...


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1847) writes:
I have the same opiz ninion


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, blue (1751) writes:
I traded my opinions for tacos. ooh.


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:
i dont know... this seems like a twister of a bunch of horror movies... not to be blunt or anything, but the title and the content has all been done before, hence my feelings of unoriginallity...


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, mywristshurt (525) writes:
i thank you for your opinion too, but this was my fantasy actually, not a movie.. if you dont like it thats fine, but i just had to write this down, and i did take my time on it and i put a lot more detail in this poem than i usually do (it took me a coup


On Friday June 22nd, 2007, mywristshurt (525) writes:
it took me a couple of days to write this


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:
maybe taken parts of Hostel for example, amongst many other cinematic adventures... seems rushed too, maybe spend alittle more time on this piece and repost... just an oppion, in a sea of many.


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:
*oppinion


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, blue (1751) writes:
o.O)) opinion***


On Thursday June 21st, 2007, Bella Butchery (1149) writes:
opiz ninion



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