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It Kept me Awake

12-03-05

Tears,
Are but another word.
Fears
Are the voices unheard.

Pain,
Is the feeling of lost glory.
Shame,
Is the look of unfaith.

Sad,
Is the used expression of sorrow.
Mad
Is the hateful word of tomorrow.

Heartbreaks,
Are the things that make us loose control.
Headaches
Are but a minor injury to the soul.

Life,
Can make everything worth while.
Strife
Can make the things turn over-mild.

Death,
Can finally mean the end.
Breath,
Can finally be a friend.

It kept me awake,
So which ones do I take?

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On Monday July 31st, 2006, An Expired Member (18) writes:

luved it woman.

On Saturday July 29th, 2006, mywristshurt (524) writes:

thanks all of you.. i really appreaciate the comments and all they have done for me

On Friday July 7th, 2006, An Expired Member (18) writes:

hmmm...very nice...beautiful composition

On Monday May 15th, 2006, An Expired Member (6) writes:

its so plain this is how it is poem that i want to read again and again

On Tuesday April 25th, 2006, Thorn (436) writes:

Hm. Well structured. I tip my hat to your ability to tap your imperfect life for inspiration.

On Tuesday April 18th, 2006, The Fool (1001) writes:

I feel at home with your words they rebound off of me and make me feel someone elses pain and that's just fantastic

On Saturday April 15th, 2006, Baron Von Dark (150) writes:

Fantastic write here. Reminds me of some of my own. A fav.

On Saturday April 15th, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty (75) writes:

Does putting words to your feelings help them be less troubled? Sometimes mine do, not always. Loved this piece...great movement between each verse

On Saturday April 15th, 2006, Shadow Rapture (225) writes:

Devastatingly simple but crushingly effective the words simply punctured through me. I sense a troubled soul here so I hope the writes alleviate somewhat the dark clouds. I really hope so - kind regards Colin.

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