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Elizabeth's Song

Decembers north wind Blows
to find me in a sullen mood
for spent time wasted seems to
me, like a wayward travesty

To spend much more time we would
be, trapped in just a fantasy
please make it easy, make it quick
Cut the strings don't let them stick

A life with you I can not bare
I wish the past held no care
For time with you
My armour rent
and place upon
My heart a dent

For whence it came I wish it go
My heart is broken we both know
though time ahead indeed uncertain
I wish to pull and draw the curtain

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On Monday April 23rd, 2007, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

Fan-bloomin'-tastic! Every word took this piece into the ascendency whilst it spoke of your descent from love and a broken heart...Magnifico!! -carl

On Monday June 5th, 2006, Velvet_Raventon (690) writes:

Now I know where Christa got her talent from =) ~V.

On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:

I agree with wonderland. Was a pleasure to read

On Sunday May 7th, 2006, batman nipples (2243) writes:

Tender sort of devastating. Extremely well written.

On Tuesday May 2nd, 2006, An Expired Member (8) writes:

i love this poem...great work

On Tuesday May 2nd, 2006, Astra Dei (632) writes:

good title. Good begining but the last stanza... well done indeed

On Monday May 1st, 2006, damascus (134) writes:

Beatiful

On Sunday April 30th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1041) writes:

The last four lines really struck home...my name is Elizabeth, which is one of the first things that drew me to this piece...but your words are enchanting, and they captured me in their net. Wonderful write. *Evangel*

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