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the stubble on your lip
scratched as we kissed

and burned my face warm.

poetic prose
faded from behind my eyelids
like sun spots over the ice.

I can see the snarl
curling on the edge
of your

bottom lip
as you scowl
at me.

a burden of soft soapy tears
unfolds along my cheek

taking my make-up off,
and me along with it.

I offer my cold hands
to cup your blackened
remembrance

although
I am foolish to think
they will suffice.


blood smeared down my thigh
like a watercolor sunset
of my cells

and you were more tender
then I could ever recall

         like a child smashing ants.

I left.
turning out the light and
stumbling through the biting
night as

you slumbered.

eyelashes shuddering
against your placid
glacial
dreams.

I'm hypothermic now.

my breath
escapes in
frigid jolts

from my
lungs.


so I walk away faster.

everything numb and out of reach.

my eyes sting blue
with a torrent of sleet behind them

.
the way a persons face
blurs when you squint hard at it

you're growing dim

.
the sound of your
 beating heart
under foggy glass.

and I decline.

the trail of my fingertips
dwindles on your skin

and is washed away

 with the
 falling snow

. . .. .




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On Monday March 17th, 2008, ReddropX (46) writes:
This left me somewhat entranced. Nice work.


On Tuesday March 11th, 2008, Tinuviel (74) writes:
"a burden of soft soapy tears unfolds along my cheek" made my eyes burn. Enjoyed it


On Thursday April 19th, 2007, Nuri (199) writes:
I don't know how I missed this. Seriously, your works epitomise the feeling I get when I fall asleep and dream of something unexplainable and beautiful. You give enticing glimpses of something grand.


On Thursday April 19th, 2007, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
This was just entirely fan-bloomin'-tastic..."and you were more tender/than I could ever recall/like a child smashing ants"..what a whammy of a line to finish the previous two. Altogether this was perfection.


On Saturday March 31st, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:
this left me aching for more. perfect.


On Monday March 26th, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:
Nicely done, I look forward to reading more.


On Saturday March 31st, 2007, stormtalk (915) writes:
p.s. "frigid jolts" is a great description of hypothermia.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, Endifference (275) writes:
'placid glacial dreams', damn that's nice. Killer imagery. If you were trying to get the atmosphere across in this one, you hit the nail sqaure through the board. Bravo. -END


On Friday February 2nd, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:
You are one of the best in painting vivid imagery with your words. I particularly liked the contrast in the lines "and you were more tender then I could ever recall like a child smashing ants." Great piece! Ciao, T/S


On Tuesday January 23rd, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
hard hearing about another, but as always, you astound me. if only you could act your feelings (ie poetry), you would be more happy. but that is just my oppinion.


On Saturday January 20th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
the images you invoke in this are so beautiful and harsh.."blood smeared down my thigh like a watercolor sunset of my cells" it's a sense of lovely with a bite..and the last line is perfect. amazing write.


On Saturday January 20th, 2007, wonderlandhysteria (2197) writes:
This sways at a whisper.. a sultry, aching piece.. crushing in the loveliest of manners.. you're fucking phenomenal.


On Saturday January 20th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:
"blood smeared down my thigh like a watercolor sunset" Fantastic imagery! Vivid & sexual, wanton, thrillful.you. & even softly tender; "...soft soapy tears," even if it's a burden; or tender as "a child smashing ants." Yea, that's the stuff of poetry. ...


On Friday January 19th, 2007, dying angel (1374) writes:
"the sound of your beating heart under foggy glass." it's so hard to hold onto something that makes you numb. this was so breathtaking.


On Friday January 19th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (348) writes:
A truly beautiful depiction. The dwindling away at the end was heartbreaking. Certain lines just... impacted me. So eloquent yet natural.


On Tuesday February 6th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (169) writes:
Agreed, this is definatly impacting, and has left me feeling inspired.... -Heather-


On Friday January 19th, 2007, Six-Out (1832) writes:
again, as through the years, you stun me. this is something completely different than what you typically write, but this just goes to show that you master all areas. really. this is tragically ripping. you are talent.



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