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sever/heart

circulatory failure

cardiac
upset

 includes loss of consciousness;
 quick, shallow breathing leading rapidly to heaR.t ache ]
 profound arterial hypo tension with non palpable pulses over major vessels;
and :: absent heart sounds.

Within several minutes
Electrical dysfunction
ventricular fibrillation
loss of hope
 leading to vital organ injury.


""cardiogenic shock

symptoms include but are not limited to:
-chronic romantic letter writing and in most cases, poetry.
-chest pain behind the breastbone
pain that may be described as:
squeezing, deep aching,
 tightness, or large pressure
a ton of bricks/
pain may be intense or subtle;
 however,at times the victim may not feel any pain at all ~

shortness of breath that
occurs suddenly:..
& may be accompanied by overwhelming pain
sweating, nausea, delirium
light-headedness,
dizziness, or fainting
feelings of "impending doom"
or "abandonment"

worthless clear excretions from the tear ducts
are common.

oO.


~Note: heartbreak may be fatal ///


. Hemorrhage should be stopped .

kiss.airways.clear.
wipe.tears.

denial denial denialrepeat x3



only preventative measures
 are

 to a v oid love at all costs.








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On Wednesday December 5th, 2007, Circe Avalon (183) writes:
That poem was so good, I read it to my friend, who is a med tech, and she was so amazed. We both agree, good work


On Tuesday November 20th, 2007, me_the_messenger (174) writes:
beautiful. soo true. definately a masterpeice, although im sure someone below this has already said that =) *messenger


On Thursday April 12th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1171) writes:
ha, sex on a stick. that is what you are. i forgot what this was about, but my memory was just jogged around the block.


On Sunday April 10th, 2005, suicideseason (2161) writes:
You capture the integrity of feelings and put them to words...still all of the emotion is in tact...not a hair out of place,so to speak.Heart wrenching...bitter truth that you sum up all too well.Exquisite piece.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (75) writes:
I read this almost in the vein of my favorite poet Sapphire. It is magnificent and captures time in its movement and simple drive. Including enticing detail. Oddly wonderful.


On Friday October 8th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (877) writes:
Beautiful,heartwrenching...I love it...exquisite write Kya


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, Daemonicus (657) writes:
aaahhh very witty and a great way to say it :)


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
oh-my-god. the ending left my heart before me as a doormat to be abused. im purging my lungs of air-and inhaling the new day. totally heartbreaking-and im saying the least. incredible. incredible. incredible. repeat 3x ;)


On Saturday October 2nd, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (588) writes:
beautiful, and very delicate, every word had its own meaning.. the ending is very sad, but this to me seems like a tribute in a way to writing, the passion of it and romance.. in a bitter way, beautiful though, great write :D


On Friday October 1st, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:
excellence! your distinctive style beautifully wrought here; wonderful write.


On Friday October 1st, 2004, Zhee (642) writes:
this felt like being in med school all over again... you really did a wonderful job with the concept... great write!


On Friday October 1st, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
This is one to be handled delicately...a true masterpiece...I really need to read all of your works.


On Friday October 1st, 2004, Six-Out (1831) writes:
I agree with the doc...I bow before you. This ripped me in two. I know when it's you, I'll be amazed, thank you for not letting me down.


On Friday October 1st, 2004, DoctorAsh (512) writes:
goddamn-it . misses star person, i bow before you - love is but a cup of spuck.


On Friday October 1st, 2004, Angst Queen (472) writes:
whoa...i'm gonna have to read through this one a few more times. i like



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